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Hymn To The Fallen by iLuna17
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: The boy who lived is dead. Voldemort has won. There is no hope for the Wizarding World. Everything is lost; all those who fought died for nothing. People are crying. People are screaming.





But what is going through the minds of Harry's friends as they see his body?

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 594 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/04/12 Updated: 01/12/12


Reviewer: LuneyLaney Signed
Date: 01/13/12 Title: Chapter 1: Hymn to the Fallen

Lovely. There was a ton of raw emotion that came through. I always wondered what must have been in the mind of Harry's friends as Hagrid carried Harry back to the castle and this seems to fit it perfectly. Good work.

Author's Response: My poetry is all very . . . raw. I, too, always wondered about what Harry's actions did to his friends. I know that if my best friend died. . . I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks a mil! (Reviews make my day)
Ellie

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