WHOA! Didn' t see that coming!
I love the suspense you put into your writing.
Once again I have read another amazing story by you. I love your writing style. As I commented earlier I lover the suspense you put in your writing. This is completely random and you don't have to anwser but where did the name Eponine come from? Anyhoo I loved it and once again couldn't wait to read it again when I had to stop. Keep on writing! I really hope you write some more fan fictions because I love reading them. You are deffinitaly my favorite author on fan fiction. Thanks for writing.
~ ~ ~”Sirius…” Sirius blinks. He cranes his neck to look behind him.
A shiver runs up his spine as if a cold, dead finger is stroking it
"Who’s there?!” he calls out to the voice, spinning clockwise to try and catch a glimpse of whatever it is.
Oh wow! I love this! It is so good! It leaves off on a clif-hanger. I kind of wish that it kept going because I really like this. You are going to get sick of me saying this, but the suspense in your writing is awesome! I hope you keep writing. Thanks for writing!
It kind of scares me that Lotttie did it. If she doesn't have any love or any emotions she could turn into a Death Eater.
Author's Response: Good point. Thanks for the review!
First of all I just want to say that this story is amazing. I don't know what I'm going to do now that I don't have anymore to read. Your story was so good. It never felt like it went on and on (something I would know being a long story writer). The last couple days I have been reading nonstop. I don't really know what to say... it was SOOO good! Thank you for writing it. I could see this book in a book store and being read be millions of people. I really don't know what I'm going to do now that I have finished it. I love the story and I think that you should continue writing and become an author. It is one of the best stories I have read. Thanks again for writing it.
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you for all of your kind words. They really mean a lot to me. It's my dream to be an author so it means a lot to me that you even read it all!
Thanks so much for the review!Eponine
I liked it. It wasn't as good as Halfway To Infinity, but I like long stories so that's the only reason. I really like your writing style. This story got me thinking about how some people that are bullied could do bad things to get revenge. I felt like it had a deeper meaning than just a Fan Fiction and I liked that. You keep on writing! I am a writer myself and you give me insperation to keep writing. I really like your stories. Thanks for writing.
Hi! I really enjoyed your story. I can't wait to read more, especially since you left it at that cliff hanger :). This story is very well written. I hope you continue writing. Please respond! Great job!
Each member of the Black family had their own fate, whether it followed or went against the family's beliefs.
This is really good poetry! I love that you write about the Black family! They are so my favorite family.... But Lyra will always be in it in my mind :)
Author's Response: I do love the Black family very much. And after investing so much time in my fic, I think Lyra will always be in it in my mind, too!
Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?
*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.
**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.
Part Four Synopsis:
It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.
Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!
Oh my gosh! I love this story! I love that you explained all her feelings and other peoples' feelings. Thank you so much for having the Black sisters reunite at the end! I was so sad that they used to be that close and then it fell apart. This story was really well written and captivating till the end. I love the epiloge and that you explain everybodies children and how they turned out. That's one thing I'll always be a tad bit resentful at from HP. I enjoyed this so much and you are definitly in my fav authors and this story is in my fav stories. Thank you so much for writing this! Keep writing please!!!
Author's Response: I was sad the Black sisters couldn't reunite either so I devised a plot that allowed it to happen! Thanks for reading and reviewing the whole thing. It's always nice to get reviews even though I wrote this story about five years ago! I probably won't post anymore fanfiction but I will definitely keep writing! Thanks again :)
Ah so sad that you won't be posting anymore ffan fiction! I'll be waiting to read your books, no pressure :). I definitly have some ideas about stories I could write about Bella, Cissy, and Andy. Thank you!
Author's Response: I mean, I won't necessarily NEVER post anymore fanfiction...I actually started a sequel to this story and even though it's far from complete and may never be, I could take the scenes I have written and post them as one-shots. We'll see :) Good luck with your stories!
I'm really glad Lyra and Sirius have a friendly, family-like bond! Sirius is probably one of the only people that understand what Lyra's going through. I hope Lyra tells him about her family soon!
Author's Response: I love their bond too! I also love that people are still reading this story even though I posted it so long ago! Thanks!
Meh! Horrible place to have to stop! I love this story! Can't wait to read more tomorrow!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Arg Snape always gets in the way...
Author's Response: Yeah, he kinda does...that won't always happen, though. Thanks for my 300th review!
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know...but I see at this point you know that everything turned out okay. I'm a sucker for happy endings so I couldn't end the story like that.
I like it a lot! It sounds like a great start to a great story!
In the forth paragraph, second sentence: Rose flipped to the back one more page and found another set of notes in read. Did you mean another set of notes in red?
Hmm well I never could resist puppy dog eyes :). no I'm just kidding. It's really good, and now I'm wondering if she's going to go back in time.
Ahh! So much suspense!
Weird, really weird to fall in love with someone that's dead