I like the cuteness and the fluff, I'm a huge H/Hr-shipper, but I don't think it'll ever happen after HBP. Sadly, Hermione obviously loves Harry as a friend and loves Ron in another way. I don't think she would give up on him that easily, and Harry wouldn't forget Ginny either, even if she died in the war (couldn't really make out if she really did...) Bu this story was still very cute, and extremely well-written! Good job!
Wow, this story is great! I wasn't all that convinced during the first chapters, but ch 4 was absolutely brilliant!! I liked Lana, I hope she'll be a part of the story. Cute with the necklaces...I just get this vision: that Voldemort kidnaps Hermione and/or Ginny and they like find a necklace hanging on a branch or something...I have a very vivid imagination =P And the ring! That was so sweet! I assume that will come in handy later... Can't wait to read about Christmas Day, and when Harry hands over Hermione's present!! Please update soon, this story is sooo great!! Excellent job! 10/10!
Author's Response: Mystery, mystery. Nice imagination, there will be no hanging on necklaces on a branch though, but the kidnapping is possible..
Will you ever update?!? I miss this story, please update soon!!
Author's Response: Ugh, I know! I'm terrible, really. I have written chapters 5 and 6, I swear, lol. Chapter 5 has been submited like 18 times 18 different ways but it keeps getting rejected. Keep your fingers crossed. Next chapter is called "Everything Changes" and chapter 6 is called "Nothing Compares". Hopefully you'll get to read them soon though!
Another great story, Croyez! I've only read a few of your one-shots, and I thought they were wonderful, as well as this. I haven't read any multi-chaptered stories, so this will be interesting. You've got a great start to a story here, I'm a stubborn H/Hr-shipper and I love that you still write HBP cannon. The flashbacks are a great way of filling in the gaps. And, as always, your writing is wonderful =) Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10
Oh, but you can't put this story on pause! I was so happy when I saw you'd posted another chapter, I've been waiting for it for ages! I love the unspoken tension and attraction between Harry and Hermione, and I want to know what's wrong with Ron! And Death Eaters, in St Mungo's! You can't leave us hanging now, that's just cruel! =/ No, I'm sorry, I'm not going to pressure you... I know from experience that that only makes writing even harder. But please, try to update soon? I love this story! =)
Are more chapters on their way?
Author's Response: Technically, yes. I have loads of ideas buzzing around my head for this story, so I'm really excited about it. The problem is, school this year has been extremely demanding in almost every aspect. I've been studying and doing a lot of work, and when I'm not, I've been with family and friends. I haven't been writing at all. So, I'll post chapter two, which has been writen for quite a while, but for the next few chapters a long wait will ensue, I'm afraid. =)
Thanks for your support, though! =) It's great to hear you like the story, really.
Oh, I was so sad when I saw that this story was already completed! Yet, the ending was very good. If it would have continued, it would've been a bit strange... I wouldn't have wanted to choose either! And she can't exactly date them both, can she? ;P Anyways... really cute, and nice portrays of both the twins and Hermione. Loved this fic! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
And I know what you mean about choosing. I mean talk about your impossible task! Besides, why choose when you can have the cake and eat it too. :D
Oh god. I don't know whether I should laugh or cry. I would die if the series ended like this! Nevertheless, you did a really great job on this story, it seems well thought-out and is very realistic (although I may not want it to be =P). Nice to end it with 'scar' too. This was an interesting little story, and you're a truly talented writer! Excellent! =)
Author's Response: Haha well despite the fact that it would be horrible if this was how it ended, I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for the very nice compliments (: and I appreciate the review
Wow, I liked this story! I feel as confused as Hermione - I don't exactly hate Ron, but I just can't ship them either. I wouldn't say that it was odd, just different. Different in a good way =) In fact, I've been thinking about writing a story like this myself, because like I said before, I feel exactly the way Hermione feels. Anyway... was that Luna there, at the ending? Don't tell me it was Malfoy, then I'll be grossed out... I'd really like to read the alternate ending! Can't you post it in the chapter, just do a row of asterisks or whatever and post that one too. I'll put this story on my favourites and keep a look out! Good job! =D
This chapter was absolutely amazing, just like the previous ones. I couldn't help but getting caught up in the story, feeling and thinking about the things Harry did. All the emotions, feelings and details that you put into writing, they're so realistic! I can't even try to find a way to say how talented a writer you are, I think close to 100 reviews is convincing enough. I'm just hoping that you'll keep writing, and update this fic soon. Keep up the GREAT work! =) 10/10
Author's Response: \'ello Hokey! Thank you SO much for your review! I love hearing from those who\'ve followed this story from the start... gives me a good idea as to how, exactly, I\'m doing. And I\'m glad you think everything\'s realistic! That\'s definitely been one of my more important goals. :) I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think... so thanks again, dear. <3!
I just read all seven chapters, and all I can say is OMGOMGOMG!!! This story is so great! The plot itself is so well thought out, and I can't even begin to describe your writing. You belong somewhere else than a fanfiction-site! Absolutely no spelling or grammar errors, and the most wonderful thing is your way of describing sceneries, characters and feelings. I love it! This story is simply brilliant! Just the right amount of H/Hr, although it was quite wierd that thing in chapter 6...I was so sure he was going to kiss her! ;P And Ginny... she's all desperate, she's so annoying! And the Horcrux thing, and the evil cliffie.. =O Why does Harry always have to be the hero? Ever since the beginning of this story I've been hoping that he'll give up on Ron and search for Horcruxes with Hermione instead! =P I just knew it was a trap, I knew it! I bet Harry will kill himself after defeating Voldemort...that would be so sad... but I bet you'll think of a way to end it so all us fans are satisfied =) I should probably stop rambling now. This is such an excellent story, and you're an excellent writer, so I hope you'll update soon *crosses fingers* 'Cause I can't wait much longer! =P Take all the stars in the sky, you deserve them all!
Aww, so sweet! I loved this story! What amazes me most is how many words you were able to come up with for the color of Hermione's eyes =P Oh...this wast just so beautiful. One little thing though - I know and you know that Harry and Hermione love each other and belong together, but you could describe a bit more how they found out that it really was so. Have to convince the non-shippers too, you know. Oh well, that was the only complaint I had, overall it was wonderful! I love it! Please write more, multi-chaptered fics too perhaps? =)
Haha! This was funny, and cute in a way. It could've been longer, describing their feelings and thoughts a bit more, but overall I thought it was good. That is just a typical Fred and George thing to do... and I loved it. 9/10!
Oh, how sweet! =) I can totally see Hermione arguing with herself like that...actually, I find myself in that situation quite often. That's what's so brilliant with this fic, you portray Hermione as a completely regular girl! Anyways, I thought it was really cute, though I was kind of sad that it was so short and one-shot. I hope you decide to continue with it! Yay for H/Hr! =D
Author's Response: I agree with you- two people fighting inside me... *bangs head on wall* GETOUTGETOUTGETOUT! *glances around* Yes, I took my medication... jk, people. I'm starting to work on the rest of the story- but it'll be a while... stay tuned... and thanks for reviewing!
Good job, this is really interesting! I can't say if I like it yet, I'll wait until I know how they got together. That's the main thing that's usually bad in D/Hr fics. Oh well, I'll add this to my favorites and stay tuned for the next chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait!! =)
Author's Response: Man you make me nervous... I hope my backstory won't be TOO terrible! Chapter 2 is in queue, and if you think its terrible don't be TOO harsh!!!
This is a really good start! The way you were thrown into the action (or whatever you call it) and th previous years filled in along the way, and the environment described so well... I've just started reading Hermione/Weasley twin fics, and this could very well be the best I've read so far! You're a terrific writer, and this story seems to have a good plot! Keep writing, 'cus I'll certainly keep on reading! Yay for Hermione/Weasley twin fics!! =D
Author's Response: Thanks for the great response! As I'm sure you know, writers love to get reviews, advice, complaints, hate letters, practically anything really! And I'm glad that you've started on Hermione/Weasley twin fics, coz I just lurve them. (but don't tell anyone I said that coz my friend would kill me)
This first chapter was brilliant, I really enjoyed reading it! Your writing's fabolous, you do have a way with words. Now that that's clear, I can't wait to read the next chapters to see how well you can write Draco becoming a "good guy"! Keep up the great work, and update soon! =)
Aaaw, this story was wonderful! It was so cute and sweet in a way, maybe because you portrayed Cedric as such a sweet guy. Anyways, I've never read anything of this pairing, but you really convinced me that this could have been. I think you wrote this story exceptionally well - not only is there a good plot and a nice way of writing it, but there aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes. That can bug me a lot, some fics with many errors really shouldn't be approved. Well, now when my meaningless babble is about to come to an end, I just want to thank you for writing this wonderful story, and hope that you'll write more of this sort! 10/10 =)
Wow, this was good. You almost convinced me, a delusional =P I don't even know why I read this fic, I must be stupid or something. But it was that Er-my-nee... I only vaguely remembered it from HBP, since I haven't read it in a while, but it just sounded cute. And that's exactly how this story was - cute. Maybe Ron and Hermione actually could make a good couple, although I think Hermione deserves someone who doesn't go date someone else just to make her jealous. Which Ron tried to say he was sorry for in your fic, so... Well, I don't know. Gosh, I can't even write a review without trying to promote my ship =P Anyhow, I just thought that single line was great, 'Er-my-nee', and your writing is excellent, although I like the previous reviewer mentioned think that you could've written a bit more, made it longer, explained their respective internal battles between feelings and emotions etc etc. But hey, it was fantastic this way too =) Keep up with the good work!
Ojoj, du anar inte hur glad och förvånad jag blev över att hitta en svenne här! =D Din fic börjar ju hur bra som helst, engelskan är helt felfri och historian verkar intressant. Jag har aldrig läst nån om Voldemort, och när han börjar göra sina Horcruxes (som jag antar att han ska göra..?) Intressant, hur som helst! Det här vill jag läsa mer av! =) Uppdatera så snart som dom låser upp!
Author's Response: skitkul att du gillade! Jag lovar att uppdatera så fort som det går. Hela berättelsen är färdig. Det blir lite om alla Horcruxes, ja. :P