To whoever wants to read this, I can tell you that I'm a human. I'm hopelessly addicted to Harry Potter, and have been for a long time, I think that explains my annoying presence.
I find it harder to read and write non-canon fics.
I love writing, so I'm giving a stab at writing fanfic, and I can now say that I appreciate all of the authors on here about a gazillion times more. :P I hope that somebody will enjoy my work, but critique away! :D :D :D
Ha, kinda OOC, but still funny. :D
I think I owe you a review, 'cause I read this story like there was no tomorrow, thinking that with 65 chapters I'd never finish before the next update. :P
Anyway, I love this story- I really like the way you wrote each character's temper. ;D It really agrees with what we learn about the Marauders in the books. I also like the fact that Peter isn't being ignored or treated like dirt because they all seemed to be treated equally within the Marauders (although James and Sirius being the most popular).
Great job! I can't wait for the next update. ;D :D :D
Author's Response: I think I owe you an apology for not responding! I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story and so sorry that you caught up to the updates even after I had a 65 chapter head start! >.< I really need to post a warning to new readers. ;) Thank you for letting me know you have enjoyed it.
Oooohhh... Exciting! Can't wait for the next update!
How many chapters have you got left?
Author's Response: Gosh, I wish I knew!! Honestly, there will be quite a few more, I think. I'd guess at least 5, and the way I write, probably more like 10...or 20...>.< I never dreamed it would be this long! Sorry for the long wait. I hope you still find it exciting. Actually, I just hope you are still reading! Thank you, HumanHorcrux.
"I'm no Ravenclaw, but I finally learnt to take no for an answer." When James stops asking Lily out, she tells him that's not Quidditch!
Cute, I really liked this!
Author's Response: Hello again! Thank you, I'm happy you're reading my stories. :)
Haha! This was great! :D I love how you wrote Lupin, and I think you got the rest of the Marauders spot on!
Author's Response: Yay! It is just a fun and silly little piece, but I do still want the characters in character, so thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I think your chapter is fantastic! Here's my addition to your reviews section! Have you written anything else?
This is absolutely, without doubt, one of the best stories I have ever read. Sure, there may have been the odd typo, or the horrible cliffhanger :P, but I think you deserve a glowing review. My only command is for you to write a sequel- PLEASE! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
This was great! Sad, but very well portrayed. :D
Poor Harry. So true. I can't begin to marvel at how well this song fits so beautifully with your story. Very touching, and written very well.
Good job! :D :D :D
Beautiful, and sweet, and oh so true! Good job! :D :D :D
This is hillarious! :D
I love this, it really captures the sense of the tension and worry, and its totally in canon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. cj
[Peter Pettigrew, Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, and the logic of fives. Dark, some disturbing imagery. One shot.]
Woah, this is haunting. :D I've never seen Peter as having OCD, but if you give it though, it would work. Where did you get this idea? Will you explore more with the Peter having OCD idea? This was fantastic- I won't be forgetting it anytime soon! :)
Oh! Love this! Will you do a sequel?
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I've considered a sequel before, but decided that I need to finish at least one other novel-length project before starting a new one. But who knows? Maybe one day Scorpius, Rosie and Albus will begin a new adventure.
Thank you for reviewing!
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
This is a fantastic story! I love how well defined each of the characters are. I love how when they were all in the Burrow, everyone's voices weren't identified- it really gave me the feeling that everyone was shouting and there was a mass breakout of chaos. :D
I have one question though. You said there were 10 other cousins- I thought there were 12 cousins in total? Also, how old is Lucy in your story, and what year is Lily in?
Great job, you're a fantastic writer! :D
Wow! This is amazingly powerful, I really enjoyed it. The emotions are overwhelming- you did a fantastic job. :D
I just wanted to point out, in case you didn't know already, that James would have been 21 by the time Harry was born, and that they had hardly been in hiding for a week before Voldemort came (although in the case of your story, the months in hiding thing works really well :D). Also, I think that her name is Marlene, not Marlena.
All the same, good job, I really really liked this! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you HumanHorcrux. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for pointing out that flaw. >.< I will fix it. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. These old ones sit around and I don't think of them for a while, so it is nice to know they are still appreciated. :)
Oops, sorry, I missed a line. Your timeline for James and Lily's hiding is right. :P
Author's Response: :) No problem!
Nice, but FLUFF alert! :P I doubt 17 year olds would talk like that though... I enjoy reading your fanfics!
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
Ohh... Even rereading is fantastic! :P Great job as always.
There is just something about the way you write that I absolutely love- I just can't put my finger on it! :D
Keep up the good work! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think notifications went wonky for a time because I never saw this, and I'm glad I went and looked to see if I had any unanswered reviews. :)
Your relationship with Fred existed almost entirely within a broom cupboard.
You and Fred: a Hufflepuff and a Gryffindor, two complementary souls. In a world where nothing is certain, you find comfort in a dusty third-floor storage room.
Wow, this was written beautifully. I didn't notice the third-person narrative, it wasn't something that I had to overcome to beable to read the story- quite a feat!
I love how the "you" is unnamed, you did a fantastic job, and you developed a fantastic character- even without a name (I like it better that way). :P
The thing about the twins being copies of each other, though, is somewhat true, although I don't really agree. Fred and George are portrayed rather differentlly in books, but I like the second line- "complementary parts". A wonderful analogy. :D
Great job, this is going into my favourites! :D :D :D