Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is email@example.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
Poor Lily! Hopefully there last year at Hogwarts is good.......
Author's Response: Hmm... Well there are good parts to it. Thanks for reading!
So he finally told Lily. And when does the wolfbane potion get invented again?
Author's Response: The Wolfsbane potion doesn't get invented for a long time, definitely not in this story. Thanks for reading!
I didn't think ot was possible to have such a bad Christmas, but I guess it is. Nice job yet again! I loved how you seperated this chapter into four parts again, it really sums things up in my opinion. I felt sorry for Remus because his grandparents don't accept him because he's a werewolf. Sirius has always had a hard time with his family, but I rememeber in J.K. Rowling's eyes that her would be leaving his family forever and go to live with the Potter's when he was like 15 or 16 years old, so his time for that is coming. I liked how you included his cousins in the chapter. I know they're really evil, but I love them all the same. It's so weird seeing them all so young. When I was reading Harry's portion of the chapter, all I could think about during his dad's speech was the fact that James would be dying in like 8 1/2 years. He would not have a happy life because he would have to face Voldemort all thanks to his friend Peter. When Peter was thinking about his sorting, all I could think about was the fact that he should have been. The four friends go through so many things together and it's sad to think that they either do terrible or noble things and eventually dying young in the end. I know it's sad, but that's wht came to mind during this chapter and it was supposed to be Christmas too.
You did a really fantastic job again and I can't wait to read more. I hope it doesn't bother you that I am reviewing your story this much, but you are so welcome that I am reading it. If it wasn't good, I woldn't be reading it. I actually think that I will finish this one to, even though it is so long. I don't care though, it;s so good and I love reading anyways especially if it's about Harry Potter.
I have been a member to this website for six months to a year. I don't remember when I exactly signed up for it, but I have tried to submit this one story for the longest time and they keep deleting it, so I started another story and oosted it instead. I would love for you to read and review it if and when it gets accepted to this site. On to the next chapter!(:
Author's Response: It could be possible, but don't feel too bad for Remus yet. You'll see why in a few chapters. I actually did enjoy writing his grandparents quite a bit. Yup, Sirius does run away from his family around that age. I believe he tells Harry that in Order of the Phoenix. His cousins, while evil, really are awesome characters so I don't blame you for loving them. I hadn't even thought that way when James's dad does his speech, but it is true that he would have to face Voldemort. James does get a lot of happy moments, though, so you'll be able to read those. Peter really should have been in Slytherin, but he undergoes a lot of change throughout this whole thing. It doesn't bother me that you're reviewing, I like hearing what you have to say. Haha, that's true :) Sometimes it takes a while to get things posted. I had a lot of trouble with my fic "Imaginary" but I was given a lot of good advice about how to fix it up to not only get it posted here, but to make it even better. If it's accepted, let me know what it's called and I'll read it.
Haha. I've never much liked the centaurs because they are so mean, but at least the four friends didn't get hurt by them. It's too bad they got colds though oh well it's all for the best I guess.
Author's Response: Yeah centaurs aren't that nice, except for Firenze. Haha yeah, it's too bad they got colds, but that's what they get. Thanks for reading!
AMAZING once again! I feel bad for Remus. I know there is no hope for him, but I do hope he gets better soon! Chapter 10, here I come.(:
Author's Response: Haha, there's hope for him... temporarily. But it's still hope. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Haha, I like how all of their birthday's are close together because it was really funny! When are Peter's and Frank's birthday? They were the only ones left out... Good job yet again and onward to chapter eleven!(:
P.S. I get so confuesed when Harry talks because he reminds me of Harry Potter, haha.
Author's Response: Well James and Remus, according to canon, are only two weeks apart and since we never found out Sirius's birthday, it became April. Peter's is in August and I never really established one for Frank... Thanks for reading!
I like James's job as a Healer. I know he won't have a lot of time to be one since he will be murdered in about two years, but I like his ambition. I just realized Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia not liking James because he was magic, but also because he didn't have a job... He was only twenty years old when he died and let's not forget that he was in hiding... He had no time for a job! Those muggles are so dumb sometimes! I'm talking about uncle Vernon and aunt Perunia of course...
Author's Response: Yeah, I was originally going to have him as an Auror, but then Healr seemed more appropriate for him. I think Vernon and Petunia knew he wasn't unemployed, but that's what they would tell people to make up excuses about why they didn't like him. Thanks for reading!
I have to admit that I was a little nervous for the prank they were going to pull on Professor Crane. I really like this so far, but my only criticism is that the second half of the year was really short and Remus never had werewolf problems. Well he did, but you never wrote about them, haha. Oh well, I just can't wait until his friends figure it out!
I was surprised that Ravenclaw won the House Cup and not Gryffindor. I myself would sort myself into Ravenclaw so that made me happy.(:
I'm also surprised that it's already the end of their first year. It's only chapter eleven and there are still so any chapters to go. I can't wait to read what's next.
I really enjoyed the "first book", you did a terrific job writing it. Now onwad to the "second book!"
Author's Response: The prank kind of freaked me out what I was writing it, in regards to what people would think of it. The second half was short because my original intention was to have each year in school be eleven chapters, but by fourth year it was shortened to nine. A lot of attention is paid to Remus's werewolf problems, but I did have to give him a rest from the torment once in a while :p That'll come back in the next chapter. Wow, I forgot I had Ravenclaw win. Gryffindor probably wins at some point. Glad that made you happy. According to Pottermore, I'm a Hufflepuff, but I love Ravenclaw too, so making them win was something I didn't mind doing. This stretches well past their seventh year of Hogwarts, so that's why first year is already over. Glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Be advised, this will be one of the only times you will think that :p Thanks for reading!
P.S. Have Frank's birthday be over the summer, haha and my birthday is August 9th, haha. I don't know when Peter's birthday is in August, but I did know James' and Remus' birthdays. Maybe Peter's is close to mine...(:
Author's Response: If I never say when Frank's birthday is, feel free to think it's in the summer :p Peter's birthday... is either August 14th or August 24th, either way not too far from yours.
Again, poor Peter! I hate the way he has to be in J.K. Rowling's eyes. It's not fair!
Author's Response: Well someone had to be the traitor... Thanks for reading!
Man, I can't believe that Hogwarts is in the past now... Weird. I still remember their first year...(:
Author's Response: Yup, Hogwarts is over, now onto life outside the castle for them. Thanks for reading!
Now that sounds evil...
Author's Response: Well it's Peter, he likes to think he's better than he is. Thanks for reading!
Hmm, I wonder what is going to happen next?? .......
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
They want to do this and by wanting it, they face the consequences that will be terrible!!!!
Author's Response: Well they don't know that yet. Thanks for reading!
Yupp, they sur diid prove themselves.(: Moving on to the next. I might be able to finish this story today...
Author's Response: Yes they did! And if you do finish this today, I give you much credit for being willing to sit through that many chapters in one day. Thanks for reading!
Poor Remus. I feel so bad for him. I was wondering if that was the Wolfbanes potion?
I love this story even more then I did before because I am excited to read what happens through the course of their lives at Hogwarts.
I love this story and I love reviewing it. It's great and you're probably going to recieve a review from every chapter. I hope that is okay with you...(:
Author's Response: Nope not the Wolfsbane. I think in Half Blood Prince, Slughorn said the potion was invented recently, so that was just an attempt at a cure. Hopefully you like what happens during their school years (and after). Thanks for reading!
I feel so bad for Remus again.
I completely forgot about quidditch so that will be cool to read this time.
And I just want them to figure out Remus' secret. All they need is there, they just need to put two and two together, haha.(:
P.S. What's your pottermore name, I could accept you as a friend. Mine is SpiritDawn5286.
Author's Response: Yup, there's Quidditch. I actually really hate writing it, so there's not much in terms of actual Quidditch, but it's mentioned a lot throughout the story. You're really close to them finding out his secret. I think my name on Pottermore is hexscarlett15, but I honestly don't even go on there anymore.
True that, sist-uh!(:
August 24th, Peter's birthday, haha.
Nice job on the sorting part. You skipped a huge gap which was cool because before long things could get boring. But your story doesn't fit the boring category, it fits the amazing category.(:
Author's Response: Haha yay, my story isn't boring! Seriously, that's one of my worst fears when writing - boring people. Thanks for reading!