Penname: crbluvsravenclaw [Contact]
Real name: Cristopher (Cris) Ryen Blakeney
Member Since: 11/27/11
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Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is crb809@gmail.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:

DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
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Wit Beyond Measure by Samsijay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: Everyone knows the story of Harry's time at Hogwarts . . . but what was it like for the other students? Many other stories unfolded during those years . . . this is one of them.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21421 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/14/12 Updated: 11/04/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.

~crbluvsravenclaw

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.

~crbluvsravenclaw

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.

~crbluvsravenclaw

Author's Response: haha the monkey's just for a bit of randomness :) my little brother thought of it

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good luck with that Julia....... I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. In fact I'm going to make you and this story apart of my favorites! :D

~cbrluvsravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this! I can't wait to read what's next!

~crbluvsravenclaw

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/17/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was also so good! I love how you put only two boys in Ravenclaw and that the rest are girls. I've never seen that in any other story before! Then again in the actual books, who are the other two girls in Hermione's year? Are there even any other girls? As you can tell by my name, I love Ravenclaw, so I loved that the main house in this is Ravenclaw. The only probhlem I found is that it felt a little rushed and that was at the part where they were discussing the riddle. Maybe Have the eagle door-knocker say the riddle so that the first years can have a feel for what it's like. Then once in the common room, the prefects didn't say much to the first years about the common room and stuff... Anyways, it was a very good read and I can't wait to read more!

~crbluvsravenclaw

Author's Response: yeah I'm having a bit of trouble thinking of riddles that would seem challenging enough! Thanks for the input I really appreciate getting reviews :)

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/17/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm absolutely loving this! I really wish that I could write as well as you do!

~crbluvsravenclaw

Author's Response: aww thanks :)

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is getting really good!!!!!!!! :D

~crbluvsravenclaw

 
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I liked the beginning when it said that reading books is fun. I would have to agree there...

~future author

 

Wasted Space by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: What is she? She is a wasted space...

Written, somewhat lately, in response to the Ian Sharp challenge in PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 240 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/12/12 Updated: 09/16/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: Wasted Space

I love that I am your first reviewer!!!! And well, hi again!!! I miss your stories because like this one, they have so much detail and they're written so beautifully! I have read the Harry Potter books 7 times each and I cannot figure out the character, though it must have to do with Lord Voldemort or Nagini, that's your name anyways. I can't figure it out! You are so good at this!!! Keep it up!

~crbluvsravenclaw

P.S. I wish that Booksie would start working for you... You read one of my stories called the Loannes Potion and I updated it recently. I would love if you could read it. But I'm afraid Booksie still doesn't work for you. Well if it does, I have a lot more stories now that are waiting for your beloved comments. Thanks! And nice chatting and reading your stories again!!!!! :D

Author's Response: It's Merope! I would have hoped it obvious, seeing as she called herself a locket and a love potion gone awry. I suppose it was a little obscure. But thanks for reviewing! :)

 

Summary: Join James and his friends as they venture throught their first year and solve some mysteries.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1622 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
09/13/12 Updated: 09/18/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Letters and Shopping

I think you have a good thought process on this story. It will go far and I can't wait to read what happens next!

The only thing that I really have to say for advice is that this seemed simply worded and choppy. Don't get me wrong, some parts were written really well and don't need to be fixed at all, but other parts need some stronger vocabulary, you know what I mean?

Overall, props to you, Julie, and Sophie! I really like reading about the next generation's story and I wish that Jo would write more about them!!!!!!! :D

~crbluvsravenclaw

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! Julie and Sophie have been amazing :) I feel the same way... Wish Jo would write more about them. Thanks! ~Nidhi

 

Soiled by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Severus Snape has Lily - until she leaves him and then dies.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 162 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/23/12 Updated: 10/26/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Soiled

And I loved it! I loved the mention of Lily, though I feel like it was about both her and a flower.

This is hard because I forgot what I have already read, haha. You might get comments from me on poems I have already commented on... :D

~future author

Author's Response: This was going to be a poem about the secrets that Severus keeps buried, but somehow, the other garden analogy came through! I actually really liked my last stanza, because I just feel like it sums up all the guilt Severus must feel. Thank you for reading!

 

Vanishing Point by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary:

*And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone, but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?*


Merope's life is full of painful memories that make her wish to vanish forever. Even when she finally gets what she wants, she lets it slip through her brittle fingers, and she is left to fend for herself and an unborn baby in the bleak, grey world.

Will the fates allow her to die?

This is Nagini Riddle, writing for The Chaptered Challenge in the Great Hall, prompt La Vie et La Mort.

**Lyrics taken from "Fix You," by Coldplay.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Dubious Consent, Mental Disorders, Sexual Situations, Suicide

Word count: 6997 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/24/12 Updated: 11/10/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: I Am Still Here

What a wonderful start! Must read on! :D

~Cris

Author's Response: I was rather proud of this story, since it was my first Chaptered fic. I'm glad you found it to be wonderful. I tried so hard to capture Merope's character just right. :) But while this was fun, I think I may stick to poetry... And write an occasional story. :)

 

Just A Diary by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Ginny Weasley enters her first year of Hogwarts with one friend - a diary. But is all as it really seems?

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 178 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/26/12 Updated: 10/27/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Diary

It has! I love the repitition at the end of each line! By the way, you mispelled diary at the end of stanza three, I believe. And you better stay logged on because I'm about to read everything I haven't read already! :D

~Cris

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Your reviews have made my day!

 

Frozen by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: In the frosty air, an unfortunate man meets his doom through a dementor's kiss.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 159 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/27/12 Updated: 10/28/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Frozen

Even if I weren't a Harry Potter know-it-all, I would know to stay away from Dementors based off of this poem! They are so evil and I love this type of writing!!! :D

How did you publish so many poems so fast? Remember what I said In July how people here can publish so fast? Well you publish quickly too, haha! Oh well, that's exactly what people here need are your poems! :D

~Cris!

Author's Response: I just have poems on board to put in as soon as one gets approved. :) thank you for your review!

 

An Empty Photograph by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: An empty photograph slowly comes to life, a reminder of picking up the pieces and starting over.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 138 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/29/12 Updated: 10/30/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: An Empty Photograph

I agree. What a wonderful message you have set out here! :D

~Cris

Author's Response: Thanks, Cris. ;)

 

Moonlight by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: During the full moon, a boy and tree meet for the first time, brought together by fate.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 100 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 10/31/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Moonlight

I read the summary and immediately knew that this would be about Remus as a werewolf under the full moon. And I love "the silver queen!" Brilliant. My favorite poem by far! :D

This reminds me of my story "The Loannes Potion." I'm currently posting that on here, but it's getting beta-read.

Anyways, off topic.
~Cris

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you! I hope you read some of my new poems, because I personally like With Silent Wounds. But that's just me... Keep up your story!

 

Death's Horizon by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: In the Tale of Three Brothers, Death magicks a stone to raise the dead. But the second brother finds that he truly cannot have the power to bring back those at peace.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 126 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 10/31/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Death's Horizon

I love all the side stories as well! I love the tale of the three brothers in the movie! Really well done as is your poem here. They're just so freakin' beautiful and well written! :D

~future author

Author's Response: *blushes* You flatter me too much. But thank you. :)

 

The Canvas Life by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: A portrait slowly comes to life for the first time.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the PA.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 123 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 10/31/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Canvas Life

Because you were naturally born to write dark. And I love it! Besides, poems are better when dark! :D

~future author

Author's Response: Cris, I really enjoy your comments. :) I suspect more dark poetry will be on its way soon... And maybe a dark love story for the Cotillion if I can find the right idea for what I want to do. Keep reading ;)

 

The Sun Sets in Paradise by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: On a bright night enriched with the full moon, a young boy races across the meadows, only to meet his dreadful fate.

Written for the Birthday Challenge in the Great Hall.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 116 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/31/12 Updated: 11/01/12


Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw Signed
Date: 12/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have. And I got to say that this is way better than the story I read the other day about how Remus got bitten. That one was cheerful and not right, while this one was cheerful at the beginning then got dark, which is more accurate in my eyes. I love Remus and I love your poems about him! :D

~Cris

Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to respond! I've been busy. As for your review, I am eternally grateful for it! I hope you continue to find things that you enjoy reading. ;)

 
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