Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is crb809@gmail.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
Oh Fred, you're dead! by KarasAunty
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A silly wee ode to poor dead Fred.
No worries, I don't think anyone really Percy for what he did to his family. He might have made up with his family, but he will always be that right fowl git to me!
On the other hand, I really enjoyed reading this poem ore ode, as you put it. It was sad at most times, but you still cracked a laugh out a me at,
"Missed you so much he wed your ex
which is a little creepy."
Overall, good job!!!(:
P.S. I you enjoy poetry, I recommend that you read the poems by Nagini Riddle!!! They are really good. And if you don't mind, nominate "Her Hands" for best poetry before the 23rd. I really want her to win! You will see why once you read that poem... Thanks, bye!!!(:
~Cris!(:
His Only Friend by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: One day, a dying man collapses in the woods, only to find a true friend...
SNAPS TO YOU!!!(: THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!(:
The characters have got to be Tom Riddle and Nagini (hence your name, haha). They were obviously meeting for the first time and Nagini was getting fond of her new master...
"But he is the true
Master
Of the snake,
Of power,
Of magic,
Of death..."
This was by far, my favorite part of the whole poem. They just go so beautifully together and I mean that in the releationship between them, as well as the words through the whole poem, and this little piece of the poem.
Well done! (1,000,000,000,000,000,10)!!!(:
~Cris
Author's Response: My goodness!!!! I was so happy to see your review! I'm glad you loved it! Keep looking out for my poetry! :) And remember, you can certainly visit my thread on Poetry Anyone? ;D
The Serpent Master by Shaun
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jenny and Cleo Abel are about to begin their first term at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry. But though they may be looking forward to their brand new school life, they're soon to find that its not entirely what they expected it to be.
Yay! Your first review! I really liked this chapter and I can't wait until chapter two is up!
" For Jenny was looking at the floor, {he} hands under her upper legs which were swinging slowly." You have a tiny mistake in this part. It should be her instead of he... Other than that, there's no other mistakes that I found and like I said before, it was an amazing chapter and can't wait to see what's next. I want to read about their lives at Hogwarts right now so submit the next chapter soon and keep me updated!(:
Author's Response: Thank You! I have sent Chapter Two to by beta reader so as soon as its ready I'll submit it here.
The Last Enemy to be Conquered by AidaLuthien
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]
Summary: On 31 July 2026, Harry's birthday celebrations are a bit different than normal.
This is AidaLuthien writing for Round 2 of the Character Clinic Triathlon.
He died??!!!!!!!
Back from Vacation by Katieje
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The McKenna's are back from a relaxing vacation in the Canary Islands. Eager to get back into their daily routine, Mrs. McKenna is shocked to discover that her knitting patterns are gone. Even more perplexing, there is a picture that does not belong to the family, and the people in the picture are moving.
Haha, that last part was so funny. I don't know whether this story is completed or not, but I hope you update another chapter soon!!!(:
Author's Response: Thank you!! It's not completed, and I just submitted my next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!
The Hungarian Horntail by PeppermintToads
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A short poem about the first task.
Well you are one of my favorite authors so I got an email and what I'm trying to say is of course I liked it, silly! I'm glad I read it and made you one of my favorite authors!(:
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response: Aww! Thank yoouu! I feel so special now :) I am glad you liked it.
In the Realms of Jealousy by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: What was Petunia really feeling about the situation with her sister?
YAY! It got accepted! I am so happy for you! I knew it would!(:
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response: Thanks you for your support!!:)
Dragons on the Water by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Charlie Weasley loves his job in Romania: he was born to lead the life of a carefree dragon keeper. Yet when a new keeper from Wales arrives to help with a difficult Chinese Fireball, Charlie is forced to take on a partner, when he'd rather work alone. And this new keeper challenges him in more ways than one…
I loved it! Can't wait until you update it! I thought you did a great job. I could see Charlie acting like that at first then getting comfortable later on. I feel like you were right on with his characterization. I also like Terrence. To me, he is a nice Slytherin out of all of them, so really good job!!!(: They don't do this here like at harry potter fanfiction, but if I were to rate this, it would be a (10/10)!!!(:
~Cris!(:
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed it enough for a 10/10! LOL! I do hope you'll read more and find it lives up to your score. ;) Thanks again! ~Gina :)
The Clocks in the House by minnabird
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Andromeda reflects on her choices, not long after the birth of her daughter.
Haha, I know how you feel. Lovely poem!
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response: (:
Mad World by Nagini Riddle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]
Summary: The Wizarding war has horrendous effects on the people who fought...
Girl, you're on fire with your stories tonight. I don't know if I have read this one before, but man was it dark! I think with the way J.K. Rowling set up the wizarding world, it has to be dark and you did good with that! I didn't much like the dark fics, but I do now. there everything I like now!
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! :) that is so sweet of you to say. Yes, JKR wrote the books kind of dark at the end, but I really wanted to draw on how war affects people. I hope you keep ready dark/angsty!!! :) thanks again!
The Boy WIth Dragon Pox by PhoenixFire9605
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A young Muggle is in hospital and the doctors are looking for a
blood donor from a close relative. Harry has a plan to help. Pre Epilogue.
I really liked this read, It was really well written, but why is the text all weird? I don't know if it's just my computer or what, but it made it difficult to read. Other that, good job because it was so interesting.
~crbluvsravenclaw~
Love Song by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A love song for Lily from an unusually poetic James Potter.
This poem has been written for the Queen of James/Lily romance, Gina (gmariam) for her birthday.
Disclaimer: JKR, Moi? No, no, a thousand times, no.
I loved it! Nice job! It sounded so beautiful!
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response: Thank you! ~Carole~
Summary: With a bit of help from their dad, Rose and Hugo Weasley prepare a short play for their mum's birthday.
This is Gmariam of Ravenclaw submitting for the Character Clinic Triatholon-Minor Characters.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!(: I thought this story was cute! Nice job!
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
I Saw by BrokenPromise
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary:
Helena Ravenclaw has seen many things as a ghost and as a girl.
This poem placed third in the Negotioting with the Dead challenge over at Poetry Anyone, for which it was originally written.A big thank you to Natalie/hestiajones for giving me feedback in PA and made this poem what it is now!
I really liked this! Anything to do with Ravenclaw are my favorite stories, so this a definite like! I just don't know what to say about it because it was all true and sad and wonderful at the same time. Beautiful work!
~crbluvsravenclaw~
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, as it went through a few drafts in PA over on the beta boards. I really enjoyed writing it too. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Teach My Feet to Fly by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Andromeda Black is not a girl who is reckless. Risks are for the foolhardy, and she is too clever for that. But she hasn't factored Ted Tonks' persistence into the equation of her life.
And Ted wants to teach her how to fly ...
This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff writing for Round 2 of the Character Clinic Triathlon - Minor Characters. I chose the Music prompt.
The song that Andromeda listens to in this story is River by Joni Mitchell. It is beautiful.
Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I am not Joni Mitchell. I am someone who admires both artists greatly.
Ta lotsly to the lovely Natalie (hestiajones) who beta'd this and is a truly fabulous friend.
That was amazing! How do you get published so fast, by the way?
~crbluvsravenclaw!!!(:
Author's Response: Magic? (Thank you very much ~Carole)
Stolen Magic by coolh5000
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 34]
Summary:
Samuel Radley is a wizard born without magic. Coming from a family with generations of witches and wizards, his brother Adrian has never really understood why Samuel has been left without, especially when there are others, with no magical blood at all, who somehow find themselves able to do magic. As he enters his fourth year at Hogwarts, it seems that the Ministry are finally starting to do something about this imbalance and Adrian couldn't be happier. All around him however, there is resistance to the new laws, and suddenly Adrian finds himself an outsider in his class and abandoned by his friends, when all he's ever done is love his family.
This is coolh5000 of Slytherin writing in the Great Hall chaptered challenge, for the Phoenix Rising prompt.
I really loved reading this because it was so interesting. Keep me updated!
~crbluvsravenclaw
Author's Response: Thanks :) The second chapter is up now and hopefully I'll have the third in a few days ~coolh5000
Wit Beyond Measure by Samsijay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Everyone knows the story of Harry's time at Hogwarts . . . but what was it like for the other students? Many other stories unfolded during those years . . . this is one of them.
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
