Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is email@example.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
I think what you did was just fine!(:
Author's Response: Wow, sorry, I don't visit this site very often anymore, so I didn't see your review. I was having some trouble logging in for a while, but it seems to be okay now. I'm glad you liked the story, and thank you for the review!
I read thelast review and I don't know what to think abut that... True, if it wasn't for Seveus, Voldemort would not have known of the prophecy, but if it wassn't for Trelawny, there wouldn't have been a prophecy for Severus t hear. In the end, I think it's all about the prophecy because the boy mentioned could have been Neville or Harry...
Author's Response: True, true. And then there wouldn't be any story for us to read. So let's be thankful to Voldemort for choosing Harry. ;-)
That was really interesting in a good way, of course!!!(:
You said in your bio, that this was one of your favorite stories you have written, so I read it. Why do you like it the best? I got to say, it was amazing to the very end! Now, I'm going to read your other stories about Neville Longbottom... I hope they're as good as this one. And you better finish the 6th and 7th one because you don't want to leave me hangin' haha!(:
Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.
The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?
I absolutely loved this chapter! I liked seeing everyone get back together since the second war, you know?!(:
I don't know what House they're gonna be in yet, but I feel like it's gonna be one of each. I was gonna create a story where there are four friends in different Houses, though different than this, haha. Great minds think alike. By the way, which do you see yourself in?
Author's Response: Oh, I am certainly a Ravenclaw. :)
Oh my god! I am most definitely a Ravenclaw too!(: Hence my Penname...
Wow! I liked that story, haha. It was cute.
This is what I want to know too!(:
That was such a great prologue, you have my interest peaked!(:
I can't wait to read the other thirty chapters!(:
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
I loved every single chapter of your story!! It was so so good. You have got to keep writing because you have a very strong talent. You are like me, you imagine Albus and Rose being sorted into Hufflepuff, I imagine them being in Ravenclaw because that is my House. My story is about them going into the past, but while reading your story, I've noticed yours is WAY more detailed than mine which is a good thing for you, but not for me. You are extremely creative. Keep posting new stories, I'll be waiting.
Oh my god, you have to finish this story, that was sooooooo good! I will be looking for chapter four!(:
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I am currently working on chapter 4. It should be out soon.
That was such a good story!(: I hope you right more fics! I noticed that you have been a member since 08/08/08... Well, I don't know why I'm saying this, but my birthday is 08/09, haha...(:
Author's Response: Thank you!
Honestly, I don't know what to say about this chapter. While this chapter was really good, I am one to criticize when it comes to Albus' era because I am trying to create my own story about him, his cousins, and his friends. Your writing was excellent, don't get me wrong and you have a good idea forming which is good, I really liked it. I was confused, though, but that isn't your fault. I was confused because of all the Weasley cousins, there are so many of them. I have tea so many stories about these characters that it's hard to remember them all. In fact, I find myself forgetting some of the cousins in my story. Another part that confused me was when Professor Artemis was explaining Hogwarts. You got right in to explaining the points and then the houses. That just confused me a bit because it was so quickly said. I also like to criticize on the sorting because Albus is always so worrie abou the House he would be in. I would have liked to of seen Albus go into Hufflepuff like the hat was saying just to be different and for Rose to go into Ravenclaw for he same reasons. You didn't sort them there, which is totally fine, haha, bu it would've been cool to see them in a different house. I really liked how you put Scorpius in Gryffindor, though. I wasn't expecting that, haha. I think my favorite part was the last line when Albus thought that he might be sleeping in his father's bed. That was funny and could also be true. Overall, you did a great job on this chapter and I can't wait to read the next ones! You had no mistakes at all, I just have my criticisms because this is my favorite generation. So I don't mean to upset you in any way. Oh, I almost forgot, isn't Professor Flitwick supposed to be the Headmaster? I thought I read that somewhere that he was during this generation. And why is Progessor McGonagall still there? She retires the year before Albus and Rose go to Hogwarts..... I hope you don't hate me after this review because I hate myself for saying these things.......
Wow, it's so awesome that people are still reading and enjoying (and analyzing!) this story! Any criticisms you have are almost certainly valid; to be honest, I can't really remember the story too well because I wrote it so long ago! Although I have to admit, I have to kick myself about McGonagall. I'm usually pretty careful about continuity, but that's definitely an error: nice catch.
Anyway, thanks for reading, and I'm certainly not mad at all! Authors should always have their work honestly analyzed, and I'm sure other Mugglenet writers will be happy to have your input. As I've said before, I'm no longer really active on this site, but I do try to respond to my reviews as often as I can. Thanks for reviewing! You've kind of made my day!
You now have 790 reads and not one single review... What's up with that? In my opinion, the story was wonderful and really sad, but why can't people tell you that? It's been what three years since this story was submitted? Well here is your first review for this chapter. I really enjoyed it!!!(:
Author's Response: Thank you very much for this first review. I really appreciate it.
Hmm, you know, I honestly can't decide my favorite one. They're all so beautifully written!(:
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Is it okay if I say all???(:
Author's Response: It is more than okay!
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These are by far the best ones out of them all so far. George's and Bill's made me laugh!:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like those one's too. :)
I liked them all, but Abeforth's was funny and I like Albus's a lot. Out of them all, I still like the Weasley's.
Author's Response: Those are the ones I like as well! Thank you for reading and reviewing!