Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is email@example.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
I've said this a countless number of times and that is, you probably don't even visit this site anymore because thi is your only story and it looks to me that it's doing reasonably well on the reviews, seeing how it has the most of any story.
As for the stoy, it was interesting. We know Lucius Malfoy would never let his son marry a muggle-born, but she was right in saying that he wanted his son to marry her just so he could become popular again with the wizardin world. I enjoyed his chapter now I'm movingnkn to the next!!!(:
I know that this was made before the sixth and seventh book, so it's hard to read in that aspect since it's so different, but I like your rendemption of it, haha!(:
Good so far!(:
Ooh, this is getting good. You probably don't visit this website anymore, but I'm glad I clicked on your story about Regulus and then found this! It's really good!(:
Does this Dumbledore know what Hermione is up to? And I don't know much yet, but wouldn't it have made more sense if Hermione was in Slytherin with Tom? Another good chapter if I don't say so myself!(:
Okay, shouldn't Professor Slughorn be the Potions teacher? He is in the books after all. I think that's all I have to say for this one. O=Outstanding for this!(:
One thought struck me while reading this. Doesn't Tom already have a horcrux made? He can't die, in other words... If this story was made a little bit earlier, it would work, but by Tom's seventh yearv at Hogwarts, I believe he had a Horcrux.
I know that I'm starting to sound annoying to you, but the dark marks etched on the skin of Tom's followers are actually seen at anytime not just during the full moon... Otherwise, good chapter...(:
Uh-oh! And I have one little thing to say... "That, and the fact that he found her devastatingly attractive." Dumbledore was gay, he never found Minerva McGonagall to be attractive...
Interesting. I have nothing bad to say here, This was a really good chapter!(:
"He had kissed girls before..." Tom Riddle never shown love before, therefore he never once kissed a girl.
Okay, you've cleared a lot of things, haha. I'm sorry, just forget about some of the comments I left before... I forgot to mention the kiss btween Tom and Hermione in the last chapter, that was unexpected! I read earlier in this story that Tom wasn't a murderer yet and you just said now that he killed his father... And I think in the fourth book it said that he hated his father, so he did hate his father for abandoning his mother and he was also a muggle which Tom knew before the sixth book came out, I believe. Again, I apologized for critisizing you on the chapters before this one because the sixth book is obviously out by now and I didn't know this was made before it came out...
Wow, haha. I'm glad I can move on!(:
Nothing can fool Dumbledore, but something tells me I don't want him to know...
You're doing great!(:
Just for saying that, I have to read the next chapter now. I was going to anyways, but my interest is even more peaked!(:
I wished that this really happened. So many people who have died, wouldn't have. But this doesn't happen, unfortunately.