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Grave Days by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 100]

Summary: Front page: THE DAILY PROPHET 4 May 1998

TOM RIDDLE “ THE SELF-STYLED LORD VOLDEMORT

Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.

OFFICIAL MINISTRY STATEMENT

This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.

“Lord Voldemort” was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.

There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.

Continued on page 4

WHERE IS HARRY POTTER?

Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?

It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet “He’s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.” This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.

Continued on page 2

The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 77566 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/28/09 Updated: 04/15/10


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 01/04/12 Title: Chapter 15: Postscripts

I've re-read this story and I think i've found a name mistake in this story. There is a sentence:
Although he had politely declined Mr Weasley’s offer of a beer with his mixed grill, Hermione’s father had continued to press him.

But shouldn't it be Mr Granger?


p.s. sorry for the name mistakes I found in your stories.

Author's Response: Hi.
There is no need to apologise. If people don't tell me, then I con't know. this was a quick (in fact an instant) fix. It was spotted and corrected by one of my betas and the "final" version of this chapter on my computer is correct. And that file is dated 10/10/10! Why didn't I upload the corrected version and the time?
At least it's fixed now. Thank you. -N-

 

The Mind of Arthur Weasley by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary:
The kitchen at the Burrow has six occupants, Harry, Ginny, Ron, Hermione, Molly and Arthur. The youngsters look nervous. Arthur suspects that they are up to something. What is going on inside…

The Mind of Arthur Weasley


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 3988 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/12/10 Updated: 02/13/10


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 03/28/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Mind of Arthur Weasley

I reread this story and there was a slight confusion. In this story you say that all weasley but one gets order of merlin third class, but in A&S they get second class. Which one do they get?
For the positive, I still like all of you're stories, even after rereading it a lot of time. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and thanks for letting me know. I will change one or the other as soon as possible, once I’ve checked which one is correct. -N-

 

Strangers at Drakeshaugh by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 283]

Summary:
The locals in a sleepy corner of the Cheviot Hills are surprised to discover that they have new neighbours.

Who are the strangers at Drakeshaugh?

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2011
and
Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 89668 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
02/17/11 Updated: 03/22/14


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 12/30/11 Title: Chapter 11: A Confusion of Weasleys

I think you made a mistake. You wrote:
‘Twelve,’ Hermione interrupted. ‘Nine Weasleys and three Potters. You’ve already met my two, Rose and Hugo, and so has Henry.’

But Henry was at school the previous time Jacqui went to drakeshaugh, it was Annie who was with Jacqui.

Author's Response: Thanks for this.
You are correct, of course, and I don't know how I managed to miss that error. I've fixed it. Thanks again.
-N-

 
Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 12/02/11 Title: Chapter 10: Conversations and Invitations

I like you're stories, and this is my favorite one.
I suspect that Annie has magic in her, why? Read centuries part 5.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I couldn't possibly comment on Annabel May Charlton. -N-

 
Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 12/14/11 Title: Chapter 11: A Confusion of Weasleys

Ingenious phone number. I like te read you're stories here.
When I searched for the phone number I found another fanfic site where you post stories and there you are at chapter 14 at H&P. Is there a reason you aren't so far here? I would like to read them too. (haven't read them, don't wanna spoil my fun here.)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
H&P is behind simply because I'm rewriting it. This version is much amended from the original and it's being beta read (again) before it's submitted here. It's behind for no other reason than my beta's are busy people.
-N-

 

M.I.T.: Haunted House: Dead by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary:
A haunted house that isn’t haunted, a Muggle fortune teller who can’t actually tell fortunes and the legend of the Cursed Green Pearl! What happens when “the nation’s favourite television ghost-hunters” stumble onto something really magical? What (apart from a mysterious chest, a broken red stiletto and a corpse) lies within the topmost room of the Haunted Tower?

It’s time for the Auror Office’s Muggle Interface Team - Brown, Bones and Beadle - to investigate.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw house writing for the 2011 Mysterious May Challenge in the Great Hall - Extra Credit Prompt

This is one of four mystery stories I wrote for the Challenge. Until now I’ve resisted editing this story as to do so will (I believe) mean that it can’t be judged as part of the challenge (editing after the closing date is cheating). I can’t wait any longer.


Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 19015 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/10/11 Updated: 05/06/12


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 03/21/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Break in Transmission

I thought this story was already finished. Are you rewriting it? I already know who the killer is because I've read it before. ^^

Author's Response: You do.It was three hastily written chapters with a number of typos (and a plot hole). It will be 5 chapters when it's re-written, and no, I'm not changing the identity of the killer. -N-

 

Hunters and Prey by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 191]

Summary:
February 2000 Newly Qualified (in record time) Auror Harry Potter remains obsessed with “The List.” The ten people still wanted for their part in the Battle of Hogwarts. Their capture is essential. It will bring closure to the events of the past few years. Harry has set himself a target. He wants to see “The Last Death Eater” and the other nine captured before the second Anniversary of the battle. His attempts to meet his target will bring heartbreak, danger, pain, and a lifechanging injury for one former DA member.

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 124760 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/25/11 Updated: 01/04/14


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 12/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

I wonder how Ginny wil react now.
Furthermore, nice writing and hopefully soon more chapters.

Sorry for bad english, not my native language.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll discover Ginny's reaction soon. -N-

 
Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 03/12/12 Title: Chapter 8: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

I like you're stories. ^^ Can't wait till the next is posted, but I probably have to wait. :(
And I found a small mistake. Somewhere in the middle you wrote 'Hary smiled to himself as he left her office.' But I guess you mean HarRy.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and for letting me know about HarRy. It's fixed. This story is flowing better than I'd hoped, so there will be more soon. -N-

 
Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 7: The Hunt: Den of Wolves

At least we know why Harry is hurt.

Author's Response: Actually, you don't know the half of it... -N-

 
Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 04/08/12 Title: Chapter 9: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Nice chapter again. Can't wait for more, but probably have to. I also think I found a small mistake. You wrote:
‘Amber, any sign of anyone?’ Dacia asked. The tawny haired girl shook her head. ‘Good, keep your eyes open. Jade, go and get that bag from Amber, please.’

When the middle sister returned, Dacia Skoll smiled understandingly at Harry.

But at chapter 7 you say that Jade is the youngest of the sisters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I hope that you won't have to wait too long.
You're right, how did I miss that? 'll fix it immediately.
-N-

 

Molly and her Daughter by Northumbrian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: A story about Ginny's school days, and the relationship between a mother and her daughter.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3527 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
03/22/12 Updated: 01/24/13


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 04/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Ron Writes

The next chapter is about Ginnys 11 birthday? I would like that. Yes, I already checked that Harry is at the Burrow when Ginny turn 11.

Author's Response: The next chapter will be August 1992. I'll say no more. -N-

 

James and Me by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 36]

Summary:
Annabel is having a bad day. Her sudden and unexpected meeting with a face from her past is unlikely to improve matters.

This was Northumbrian of Ravenclaw House writing for Round Three of the 2012 Character Triathlon. This is now a longer chaptered story.

Nominated for: Best Original Character (Chaptered) story (for the narrator, Annabel) and Best Next Generation Story - Quicksilver Quills 2013


Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Strong Profanity

Word count: 23385 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/12 Updated: 07/21/14


Reviewer: Youss Signed
Date: 08/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Cataclysm

This story brought up some questions in me, but they will probably told sometime in a story (In a long time) But still I want to ask them.
The first thing I thought is that Annie had a crush on Al when they were little, this because she had only positive thoughts of him and mostly wondered how he was doing.

Next I wonder if the Charltons and potters will bezome friends again when James and Annie are going out together. And I wonder how James got on swimminging and how his relation was to Annie when they were young. I never thought of James as a sportive person, except for quittich.

It is also weird now to read strangers, because now I know how it will end on that age.

Further, very nice story and I hope to see some more next-gen fics soon. I like them really wel.

greetz

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Some stuff will (eventually) be told. I’m not sure that Annie had a crush on Al (I may change mind about that), but she certainly liked him more than she liked James.
I have several ideas about what happens next, but I’m still in the very early stages of planning them, and they are unlikely to be written until I finish something else. I’ve had this story in my head for a very long time, but I always worried about writing it because it does give some stuff away about Strangers. However, it fitted this challenge, so I decided to write it.
-N-

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