And it all starts right here
And it starts right now
One person stands up
And the rest will follow
For all the forgotten
For all the unloved...
lol this chapter was really good. lol i laughed out loud at mrs. wealey because she sounded just like she would if jk wrote it...but the rating i will give u is cause the spelling.
lol lol it was funny. i thought he really saw something good. lol good one.
This was an awesome idea and you made it really really good! Great job!
this is unlike any J/L fic i've ever read. it's sad!!!! ~*10*~
I don't even know what to say!!! This is so good. *~10~*
Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…
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finally, a chapter, lol. But i loved it...i feel so sorry for James and i don't know how you can turn all this around and make them fall in love. I bet it'll be hard. good job. ~*10*~
good job. i really want to see what happens next
another great chapter
lol it was funny but i never heard the game and i am a muggle lol
Hi...great great chapter...i'm not sure if i reviewed before but I have been reading. Please take a look at my fics that can be found in my profile.
yayyyyyy they will be finally together...too bad for James though
this was really really awesome...i hope you have a Part 2 to this one. but if this is the end, great job!
oooooooooooo i really don't like that cliffie. awesome story. Why do you need it beta-ed. I just post mines. hmmm. do you want me to read it over? :/
Oh my Robin, this is excellent! I really love your style of writing. Its really really great! Can't wait to read more!!
another great chapter and once again...i just love your style of writing
another nice chapter...and so everything begins...~*10/10*~
ummmmm ok...lol. it was ok...not the best and definatley not the worst. i like where it is going and i will keep reading because i am a huge fan of H/Hr. lol. good job
Author's Response: Thanx. I'm still waiting for the second chapter to be accepted though. As it says below. Thanx for reveiwing. :) it is appreciated.( ug I sound old)lol
In fact, the horrendous things in this collection are too numerous to name. I wouldn't think of mentioning such things as an evil wizard, birthday presents, ghosts, an owl, or a spider-filled closet.
With all due respect,
P.S. This chapters in this collection may be read in any order you please. Although, it would probably please you more if you did not read them at all.
Being a fan of the series by Lemony Snicket, I quite enjoyed this piece and I’m quite impressed by it. Snicket’s style is not an easy one to master. One would think you’d just need sarcasm to do it but it doesn’t work for everyone, but it seems to work for you here. I think it was a brilliant idea to incorporate Harry Potter into it and you seem to have his style down (though there were a couple of parts where I didn’t think it was necessary to use sarcasm or to explain.)
I laughed through the whole thing and I think that’s what you wanted.
“The Potters, that’s right, that’s what I heard — “
“ — yes, their son, Harry — “
Mr. Dursley froze. Harry was the son of the Potters.
I thought this was rather funny. What a way to state the obvious. *laughs*
Good job on adding the humor in there.
Alas, there were indeed a few mistakes that kind of distracted from the flow of the story.
“Why is Lemony Snicket pleased, when he is so unhappy when it comes to misfortune and discomfort?”
I’m not sure if I was the only one who noticed this but I think you meant to put Semony Lnicket here instead.
This man was named Albus Dumbledore and if anybody on Privet Drive had seen him, they would have called to police.
There needs to be a “call” between “to” and “police”.
But this motorcycle, was taller than me, you or even Dumbledore, you was tall to begin with.
You need a comma after the first “you” and the second “you” should be “who” instead.
Overall, very good job. I see you’ve abandoned, a phrase which here means discontinued this wonderful fic, leaving your readers in anguish and sorrow, the fic but I hope you chose to update it because I think it’s really got potential!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! And I\'ll.fix all ths typos that I\'ve been meaning to fix. >.> I\'ve also been meaning to revive the story, but I just haven\'t had time. But maybe I will soon...
WOW is all I can say. The way you write is very amazing - very much like JK herself. Your description of everything is very good and i'm looking forward to reading more...but 39 chapters...wow i have alot to read lol.
awww that was very moving...you have a GREAT writing style..its amazing...this was a very good chapter.