I've been reading your stories for two years now and you're the only author who I'm able to read. I'm leaving this review because after reading this story I went back to read the Pencil Portrait Problem and I found a problem between the two. In that story you said that Theodore watched his mother die from fever when he was eight years old but in this story she dies from a broom crash during Goblet of Fire.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, and for the compliment. You’re quite right.
I made the decision to change my history (it’s something I’ve done a couple of times, usually with minor characters like Theo Nott). I confess that I usually amend the original story before submitting the new one. I have changed PPP to fit with my revisions, unfortunately, it seems that I have not uploaded the amended version. (I’m in the process of fixing that, but the amended version breaks the 10000 word chapter limit). I’ve also realised that I needed to submit the slightly changed ending to Moon, too. That is done. Thanks for letting me know.
-N-