I really love this chapter (just as I loved all the others). This is a great story and although I know how it will end (Apparently Asleep, brilliant but sad title) I can't wait to read on. Please, try not to let your readers wait too long for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, sorry, I'm behind in this because I wanted to finish somne other things first, but I will get back to it. Thank you for the review and kind words. ~Carole~
Love your story. I can't wait to see how things are going to develop. Keep writing, please!