The Start Of A Life Of Lies by ZephyrDragon
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]
Summary: What if Draco had seen his father for who he really was right from the beginning?
Harry's visit to Madam Malkin's from Draco's point of view.
I really like this fic, it's so nicely written and has excellent voice. (I think, I'm just repeating what my English teacher says, but I still like the fic a lot, I just don't know what to say what I like about it) Mu favorite line is "'Oh, sorry.' I replied, keeping my voice devoid of all emotion, in case the jealousy crept in." It's so witty and funny. The only problem I have is that this is an AU fic, I kinda wish it was canon. But alas. Anywho, love the fic!
Out of the Darkness by phoenix_song197
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]
Summary: The battle is over, but Remus and Tonks are trapped in the darkness. Trapped between life and death. Trapped among their memories. Will they find the strength to wake up and find each other or will they be trapped in the darkness forever?
I'm crying. Sorry. And YOU ARE A FREAKING AWESOME PERSON FOR WRITING THIS!! I think I was yelling at the computer about how "Dora is alive!" and "You have to hope Arthur!"
I really love the scene where they met, I'm going to go read it again now. It was so beautiful and foreshadowed so much to come. I also liked the proposal scene a lot. I LOVED how Remus was so happy when she reduced all his points to smithereens. Again, I was yelling. ("He loves her so much! GAAAAAHHHHH!![Yes I say Gah])
And chapter five was so emotionally intense. I started crying intensely and hugged my pillow, rocking back and forth telling it, "It will be all right, it will be all right."
And the battle scenes were so scary and beautiful at the same time. And crazy Bellatrix is crazy. I was kind of half-expecting Dora to yell at any moment, "NOT MY HUSBAND, YOU ------!!!" or something. Maybe Remus? That would be interesting.
Oh, and how often do you hear the words, "I loved the death scene."? Cause your about to hear them. I loved the death scene! It was, if they had died, the perfect way for them to go out, together. And holding hands? That just sealed the deal. *Sings off key* Together until the eeeeennnnnnddddd!
Did I mention how happy I am that Remus and Dora are ALIVE?!?!?!?!?! I will tell you how happy, AMAZINGLY HAPPY!!!!
Kay I'm going to wrap this up now or else you'll get mad at me. You are an awesome writer! Keep up the good work! :D
(I apologize for the excessive hyperness of this review, I just loved it so much! SQUEE!!)
It Wasn't the Nargles by IBelieveInNargles
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]
Summary: This is Luna Lovegood’s sixth year at Hogwarts. Three of the few people she considers her friends are off saving the world, and the school is in ruins with its new management. The world is looking bleak to everyone, even this usually happy-go-lucky girl. The bit of hope that remains in their hearts is the club of students who are still willing to fight for what they believe in, Dumbledore’s army. This is where Luna finds comfort, and where she finds that she’s lost something. No, this time it isn’t her shoes, it’s her heart, and even Luna can see that it wasn’t the nargles.
Yes! NevilleLuna! I love the characterization, it's so nice and true to the books. The one thing I had a problem with was when that last paragraph was more in Neville's point of view and it kind of threw me off. Other than that, it was fabulous and well written. Please continue!
Happily Ever After Beyond the Black Holes by phoenix_song197
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Charred black holes are all that's left of those who defied the Black family. Never seen or heard from again, they are considered dead to this world. But could it be that they live a life fuller than any who remained? Could there truly be happily ever afters beyond those black holes? And will Andromeda Black be brave to find out?
(Hey look it's that crazy girl who reviewed Out of the Darkness!)
I did like it! Thank you for asking. I love Adromeda's characterization. It was what I had always imagined her like, stubborn, strong, curious, inquisitive. Her thoughts are funny and sarcastic, which I like(coughpennamecough). It's so nicely written and I'd love to see where you take off from here. The others' stories and happily ever afters, or Andromeda's own? Excellent job as always! :D
