I really like this fic, it's so nicely written and has excellent voice. (I think, I'm just repeating what my English teacher says, but I still like the fic a lot, I just don't know what to say what I like about it) Mu favorite line is "'Oh, sorry.' I replied, keeping my voice devoid of all emotion, in case the jealousy crept in." It's so witty and funny. The only problem I have is that this is an AU fic, I kinda wish it was canon. But alas. Anywho, love the fic!
I'm crying. Sorry. And YOU ARE A FREAKING AWESOME PERSON FOR WRITING THIS!! I think I was yelling at the computer about how "Dora is alive!" and "You have to hope Arthur!"
I really love the scene where they met, I'm going to go read it again now. It was so beautiful and foreshadowed so much to come. I also liked the proposal scene a lot. I LOVED how Remus was so happy when she reduced all his points to smithereens. Again, I was yelling. ("He loves her so much! GAAAAAHHHHH!![Yes I say Gah])
And chapter five was so emotionally intense. I started crying intensely and hugged my pillow, rocking back and forth telling it, "It will be all right, it will be all right."
And the battle scenes were so scary and beautiful at the same time. And crazy Bellatrix is crazy. I was kind of half-expecting Dora to yell at any moment, "NOT MY HUSBAND, YOU ------!!!" or something. Maybe Remus? That would be interesting.
Oh, and how often do you hear the words, "I loved the death scene."? Cause your about to hear them. I loved the death scene! It was, if they had died, the perfect way for them to go out, together. And holding hands? That just sealed the deal. *Sings off key* Together until the eeeeennnnnnddddd!
Did I mention how happy I am that Remus and Dora are ALIVE?!?!?!?!?! I will tell you how happy, AMAZINGLY HAPPY!!!!
Kay I'm going to wrap this up now or else you'll get mad at me. You are an awesome writer! Keep up the good work! :D
(I apologize for the excessive hyperness of this review, I just loved it so much! SQUEE!!)
Yes! NevilleLuna! I love the characterization, it's so nice and true to the books. The one thing I had a problem with was when that last paragraph was more in Neville's point of view and it kind of threw me off. Other than that, it was fabulous and well written. Please continue!
(Hey look it's that crazy girl who reviewed Out of the Darkness!)
I did like it! Thank you for asking. I love Adromeda's characterization. It was what I had always imagined her like, stubborn, strong, curious, inquisitive. Her thoughts are funny and sarcastic, which I like(coughpennamecough). It's so nicely written and I'd love to see where you take off from here. The others' stories and happily ever afters, or Andromeda's own? Excellent job as always! :D