I'm emmer, i'm 13 years old and am a drama a writing mager in school. i am also a surtified rescue plus advanced and adventure scuba diver. i enjoy school and reading!
i thought chapter one was really good! you have good 'colour words' (my english/creative writing teacher calls them) i think you captured the charters well and i thought that could have really happened after the 'finnal battle' oh and i was wondering if you could send me how to post storys i cant figure out how, it probubly says my pen name but anyways, its emmer