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Forever by ginny6142
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: In the Final Battle, we know that Remus and Tonks lost their lives fighting; however, we never saw a death scene for the two of them. We don't know what was going on with them during the battle. We only know that Remus came before Tonks, and then we see that they are both dead. This story is my take on how the power of love can never be ignored, just like Dumbledore always said.

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2142 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
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08/20/11 Updated: 08/26/11


Reviewer: Majnoona Signed
Date: 10/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I liked how you wrote the story that we don't quite know much about, which is how Remus and Tonks actually died. The story flowed very smoothly, and I did like the afterlife scene with the reunion.

However, I did find the ending a bit cheesy. There just seemed to be too many "I love you"s being spewed out that it seemed to get a bit redundant as I kept reading.

But overall, it was well-written with good grammar and spelling. Nice work! :)

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