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Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors • 1148 Reviews
Summary:
Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: LovelyFawkes Signed
Date: 10/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This could have been an okay story, but your conventions, grammar, and choice of verb tenses are awful. It made it really hard to focus on the plot. Btw, you messed up your Roman numerals. Oh, and I don't think any of these characters actually sounded like themselves. Not one of them would have done the things they did.



Daddy by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1739 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Reviewer: LovelyFawkes Signed
Date: 10/17/11 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

This was a great story! I don't know what else to say besides I loved it; it was wonderful. :)



Swimming Lessons by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 46 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Six weeks after the battle, Hermione puts on a bathing suit for the first time in nearly a year... scars are revealed as painful memories rise to the surface yet again.

I almost submitted this under dark/angst, but at the end of the day, I see it as Ron/Hermione. *shrug* Also, a gazillion thanks to my awesometastic beta Natalie, and to both Neil and Carole for helping me with all things British. :D

I'm thrilled to announce that this story was nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill in the category Best Canon Romance. YAY!
Reviewer: LovelyFawkes Signed
Date: 10/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This is extremely well written. I'm always disappointed with fanfiction because of the bad quality of writing or the poor formation of a plot. But this was beautiful. I'm really glad I found it :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. That is a really cool thing to hear. I'm glad you enjoyed the story here... this is one of my favorites of what I've written. Thanks again. ~Lori