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Moons by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary:
July 2010 and a young married couple are out for a relaxing and romantic day. An afternoon at the theatre, followed by a meal to bring back memories. It should be a fairytale day. Unfortunately, it is.

This is a sequel to Moon and is another story featuring Mark Moon (Best Original Character - Quicksilver Quills 2010). A lady named Lavender appears too.


Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 12941 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/03/11 Updated: 05/06/12


Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed
Date: 10/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: Penumbra

... and your stories always encourage me to research British "culture" (I just watched several Bombardier videos on YouTube).

Author's Response: The Bombadier ads are Rik Mayall (aka Peeves, apparently, though his scenes were deleted) doing a version of his Blackadder character "Lord Flashheart". British humour. -N-

 
Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed
Date: 10/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: Penumbra

Another new chapter. Good.
I've read a few post-war Lavender stories; your characterization of her is one of the best. Sometimes I love her and sometimes she's an annoying bitch. That makes her real and interesting.
There isn't much backstory here on motherhood for Lavender - is there more coming later? I think it would help fill in the gap between "Moon" and this story, as well as showing her soft side that contrasts with the beast of her transformation.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I have a timeline for Lavender from the battle to this story. I have similar feelings towards her too.
Lavender the mother will be pretty annoying (I have several ideas) and I feel sorry for little Violet who will be dressed in frills and flounces. I have several Lavender stories part-written. I knew when she gets bitten and when (and where) she first meets Mark.
-N-

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