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Strangers at Drakeshaugh by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 284]

Summary:
The locals in a sleepy corner of the Cheviot Hills are surprised to discover that they have new neighbours.

Who are the strangers at Drakeshaugh?

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2011
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Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 89668 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
02/17/11 Updated: 03/22/14


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 12/12/11 Title: Chapter 11: A Confusion of Weasleys

This was a great chapter. I love seeing the family dynamics between the family members, especially with the spouses. I can't wait to hear more about Jacqui, and maybe her history. I remember in one of the early chapters about her maybe having some magic blood in her, hmmm, wonder if that is going to lead anywhere?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Jacqui's observations of her new neighbours will continue to puzzle her for some time. Harry suspects magical blood, but isn't certain. That information may not be important. The full moon approaches, but before then, Jacqui meets Lily Luna Potter's godmother.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 02/15/12 Title: Chapter 12: Baking Buns and a Barmy Blonde

Oh Luna, how I love you. I can't wait until the party. I'm excited to see how the magical friends and muggle neighbors mix. Another great chapter, thank you Neil, for you wonderful stories.
-Cherise

Author's Response: Cherise, thank you.
Next: A Breakdown, a Bike, and a Barmy Blonde Again. Jacqui, Harry, Luna, and Mary. What could possibly go wrong?
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/26/12 Title: Chapter 15: Arrivals

Great Chapter! Its wonderful to see everyone as adults. The Ravenclaw boys all talking together, then of course Dean's and Seamus' families are going to be super close. Lets hope that plant doesn't make another appearance, at least in a bad way. I can't wait to see what else Jacqui picks up on, especially with the town folk arriving.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
There are an awful lot of arrivals in this chapter, and there will be more (there's only one Gryffindor from Harry's year missing). Dean and Seamus have been friends for as long as Harry and Ron. The plant may simply be a plant. But Jacqui will pick up a few interesting snippets.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/17/12 Title: Chapter 14: Interlude: Three Families

Great Chapter! I can't wait to read what happens at the party. What will the town folk think of the Potters other guest?

Author's Response: Thanks.
Other guest? Harry and Ginny couldn’t have a housewarming party and not invite their oldest friends. Weasleys and DA members (and their spouses/kids) will outnumber the Muggles.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 01/08/13 Title: Chapter 18: First Quarter

Sweden, in an hour? I wonder what Jacqui will think/say about this. I love the other accounts of the party from the other mums. What a pot stirrer Mary is! Naughty Naughty! Thank you Neil, another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You'll find out hat Jacqui will think in the next chapter. Mary has, it seems, made up her mind. Will she regret that decision?
-N-

 

Moons by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary:
July 2010 and a young married couple are out for a relaxing and romantic day. An afternoon at the theatre, followed by a meal to bring back memories. It should be a fairytale day. Unfortunately, it is.

This is a sequel to Moon and is another story featuring Mark Moon (Best Original Character - Quicksilver Quills 2010). A lady named Lavender appears too.


Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 12941 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/03/11 Updated: 05/06/12


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 05/09/12 Title: Chapter 6: Conjunction

I really enjoyed this look into the life of Lavender and Mark. Those poor boys have no clue what happened, which is a good thing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They know something happenned, but they have no idea what. -N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/24/12 Title: Chapter 5: Luminosity

What a great Chapter! I am so glad that Mark and Lavender are no longer hanging. I was wondering if she was going to transform to help save them. The three muggle boys sure got an eye full, not only with the magical world but also with Lavender, I bet Mark is glad he can Obliviate that part from their memories lol. Great Chapter as always, can't wait to see what the Auror office says.

Author's Response: Thanks
So are they, I'm sure. The boys did get an eyeful, Mark will do his best to sort things out. The next chapter won't take so long to submit. I want to finish at least one of my chaptered stories, and this is it! Thenext chapter will be the last.
-N-

 

Epithalamium by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 70]

Summary: Weddings don't just happen you know! They need planning.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 27330 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
08/24/11 Updated: 09/05/14


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 05/17/12 Title: Chapter 3: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

What a great chapter, and story for that matter. I love the interaction between the girls, though through another's eyes. Luna is a true Ravenclaw, question everything! =) I'm grateful that Ginny saw through the snotty shop owner and went with the more down to earth Sandra. Can't wait to see more of the wedding plans, or any of your other stories. I am always exiced when I see a new addition to anything you write posted!
~Cherise

Author's Response: Cherise, Thanks for the review.
This entire chapter is nothing more than interaction between the girls. I only need to add Luna to the mix to turn everything sideways. Jocasta was heading for a putdown from the second she called Ginny Virginia. Next, possibly Strangers, More likely Hunters and Prey, and an outside chance of a new Mark/Lavender story.
-N-

 

Hunters and Prey by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 191]

Summary:
February 2000 Newly Qualified (in record time) Auror Harry Potter remains obsessed with “The List.” The ten people still wanted for their part in the Battle of Hogwarts. Their capture is essential. It will bring closure to the events of the past few years. Harry has set himself a target. He wants to see “The Last Death Eater” and the other nine captured before the second Anniversary of the battle. His attempts to meet his target will bring heartbreak, danger, pain, and a lifechanging injury for one former DA member.

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 124760 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/25/11 Updated: 01/04/14


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/22/12 Title: Chapter 10: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

I love the relationship between Neville and Hannah. Now we know why Hermione is so upset with Ron, and with good reason I might add...but do I detect some office gossip (Hermione going to France with her Boss) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As Lavender would tell you, just because it's gossip, that doesn't mean it isn't true. This chapter is the midway point of the story, and from now on, there will be more answers than questions.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 05/29/12 Title: Chapter 12: The Snare: Legal Lizard

Neil,
What a wonderful chapter...thank goodness some questions are being answered. I can't wait until Linny's interview, I also can't wait to hear how Harry is going to escape the werewolf camp. Those naughty, naughty Slytherins', I never suspected them! Sorry took me so long to comment. It was wonderful, like you produce anything else, lol. Can't wait to read some more of any story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You will get more answers in the next chapter (The Hunt: Tooth and Claw) which will also be the last of the “Hunt” chapters as Harry finally approaches the “Interlude” (way back in chapter 2) with all of his aches and injuries finally explained. I’ve just realised that whatever arrives next from me will contain Lavender. Whether it’s this, Browns, or Strangers.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 03/12/12 Title: Chapter 8: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

Great Chapter! When I saw a new chapter had been posted I decided to re-read the story. While re-reading I picked up a lot of information that helps bring all your stories together. Poor Harry has to wait to see Ginny, I can't wait until the next chapter is posted. So much is starting to come to light, Ron & Hermonie, this ministry party, what's up with Linny is she trying to purposely get Ginny into trouble, she is sounding a bit shady to me. Thanks for the great writing, I always look forward to reading your stories, oh side note is there any progress on Aurors & School Girls?

~Cherise

Author's Response: Cherise, thanks for the review.
This is an important story in my timeline (I'd like to think that they are all important, and also that they all stand alone as stories). You'll no doubt have spotted Mark Moon. There are several references to things Harry believes need changing and innovations he wants to make. All of which have been implemented in future stories.
The next chapter (She Wolf and Cubs) will be ready soon, and after that you'll get a Neville's-eye view of events at the Ministry reception and afterwards. Aurors and Schoolgirls will be some time, sorry, I'm currently concentrating on this, Strangers at Drakeshaugh, and Moons (which I hope to finish soon). If I can get this and Moons completed, that will be two less chaptered fics to worry about. steangers isn't at the halfway point yet.
Readers are certainly beginning to distrust Linny.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 05/10/12 Title: Chapter 11: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

You had me on edge from the start of the chapter to the end! I can't wait for more. I love how now that Lavender is "stable" she is insisting on talking to Harry about what has been going on since his absence. Lets not worry that she is in a Werewolf colony, but that Harry must know about Ginny not being her self and Ron and Hermione had another row. HaHa...oh Lavender!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I had to smile at the cunning way you fitted the words Lavender and "stable" into the same sentence. She's still injured and she's trapped inside a werewolf village just before the full moon. Why on eartnwould a minor inconvenience like that prevent her from gossiping?
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 10/15/12 Title: Chapter 15: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

Great Chapter! I re-read the whole story yesterday so I could remember the small details. I'm glad I did because I would not have picked up on the missing fingers at the end of this chapter. Great job with the whole Susan and Terry partnership, and with Susan's thoughts on Lavender.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The man with missing fingers. :-D
You might be interested to know that the next chapter will feature Mark Moon, plus more of the Susan/Terry partnership.(And probably no Harry). -N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 12/10/11 Title: Chapter 5: The Hunt: Nice Weather for Fish

I know I have not commented yet, but I stumbled upon your stories a few months ago. I quickly read all your stories and fell in love with how they perfectly follow cannon. You became one of my favorite authors. Now on to this story, it is so good, I like how your have two stories in one, I hope an update is posted soon because I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story will continue to flip between the two timelines until chapter 15. I'm only interested in following canon. These are JKR's characters, she knows what happens to them, and she can't possibly be wrong.
Despite appearances, this is one story and there are things going on Harry knows nothing about (yet).
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/08/12 Title: Chapter 9: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

What a great chapter, as always, I am dying to know more. Does Harry get the girls out along with keeping Lavender safe? What is Scabior going to do? HIs retaliation is not going to be good for Harry, I have a bad feeling about that. You left me biting my nails.
~Cherise

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The great thing about alternating chapters is that you won't get the answers until chapter 11 (which is called "Wolves at the door).
-N-

 

The Badly Fitting Coat by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: Two letters from Gringotts send Harry, Ginny and Ron on a mission to discover the truth behind the why the Blacks were a "Noble and Most Ancient House".

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10927 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/07/12 Updated: 03/23/12


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 03/24/12 Title: Chapter 1: Mail

I was so excited to see this chapter up. I love his grandparents. I love how a certain character was so certain he was the heir and he wasn't. It is great to see a person/family receive this honor. It was wonderfully written, as always. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks.
I'm happy you liked it. The Black family crest bears a certain similarity to the crest of Sir Brunor le Noir. Once I discovered that, and figured out the succession, this story wrote itself.
-N-

 
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 02/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Mail

Oh wow another great look into Harry's life, I wonder if they'll find the heir. The part with the painting made me cry, how wonderful for Harry to now "know" his grandparents. Thank you for your wonderful writing.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Will they find the heir? You’ll find out soon. Harry’s grandparents will reappear, too.
-N-

 

April Fool by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: George's birthday is never truly happy. Will this year be any different?

Great Hall Cotillion story No.3 from Northumbrian

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Strong Profanity

Word count: 4929 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/12/12 Updated: 02/12/12


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 02/13/12 Title: Chapter 1: April Fool

This was so wonderful to see from George's point of view. I can't imagine what birthdays must be like for him...oh the farting card is so something that I could see the twins doing. I hope that Angelina kicks Romilda's butt...that might just be because I have never liked Romilda lol. I also hope there is a sequel, I would love to see more of George and Angelina's beginning relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The ideas behind this have been rattling around in my head forever, it’s taken this challenge to get me to write this. Angelina kicking Romilda’s butt? This was supposed to be a one shot but who knows, there may be a second chapter one day. Perhaps Romilda might kick Angelina’s? No, that’s never going to happen. :-D
-N-

 

Smile by Padfoot11333
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary:

There are some things that you can't say in a letter.

This is a sequel, of sorts, to my story Laugh. However, it is not necessary to read that first.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1461 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/24/12 Updated: 04/02/12


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 04/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Story! I can see Ginny being scared about telling Harry. The Ginny I picture in my mind is a tad different than the one here, not personality wise, but I just can't picture Ginny starting her final year at Hogwarts married and pregnant. I only say this because Ginny would be turning 17 right before she starts her final school year.
Thank You for the in site to this special part of Harry and Ginny's world.
-Cherise

Author's Response:

Cherise, thanks for the review. I appreciate them a lot :)

SH..sorry, was about to curse. I got a nitpick and forgot to fix the whole problem (brb), so Ginny is eighteen and finished with Hogwarts. However I agree that it would be unlike her to do such a thing.

I'm glad you liked the story, however. It was my first attempt at Harry/Ginny, so I was a little unsure about it.

Lily xxx

 

Defiance by Gmariam
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Spring, 1979: When both their love and their lives are tested by Dark magic, James Potter and Lily Evans must defy Voldemort for the first of more confrontations to come during the first Wizarding War.
Winner, Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Marauder Era story

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 16823 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/28/12 Updated: 05/10/12


Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl Signed
Date: 05/10/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Lily

What a wonderful story! I'm so glad they figured it out with out having to wipe her memory. I could really feel her emotion when she thought she killed James! Thank you for writing this and giving us a peak into James and Lily's life.
~Cherise

Author's Response: You are welcome, and thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm really glad the tension and emotion came through at the end there. Thanks again, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)

 
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