I read this through in one sitting. I felt like I was reintroduced to two important and complex characters. You're very talented, and I'll keep checking back for the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your praise for the story. I am happy you liked it and the way I handled Hermione and Draco. JKR gets all the credit for making them complex, but I'm happy to be able to keep them alive for her fans. Thanks, Jenny
Is it wrong that I'm already hoping for a part three? I really appreciate how you've emphasized what makes these two characters so compatable: their intelligence, ambition, experiences of isolation, etc.
On another note, as an American, I see the dialogue as "British", but that's likely just based on my own experiences. Keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: I'm an American trying to write British characters, so while I'm happy they sound British to you, I'm sure I'm irritating the real UK folks to no end with my inexperience. Thank you for your kind review. I confess, I'm leaving a couple things dangling in this story for a potential part 3, although that's far away at this point. Thanks again, Jenny
Like your other stories, this was enchanting and human. Thanks!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you!!
I really like this story as-is. I would definitly follow a longer AU, but the way it's written is almost poetry.