Notorius mass murderer or innocent singing sensation?
I am Livvy.
That is all.
I really liked this chappie. A 10 from me; it was excellent. Nice work. Keep 'em rollin'. And no cliffhanger? -gasp-
Author's Response: I know! *feels forehead* Nope, I'm not sick. How could I have possibly left no cliffhanger? Would you like me to go back and put one on? Haha, just kidding. Thanks for the review!
This is great stuff.
Haha, fluff. I'm a sucker for fluff. :)
Cannot wait for the next chapter. I've been following this story for a couple of months now, and you continue to impress me. Chapter 16 wasn't my favourite. I found it a tad messy but you tidied it up here! Poor Ginny. You've gotta feel for the girl. Should be interesting to see how this turns out...
This is getting interesting! I'm so glad that we're getting regular updates again - you go, girl!
Um, need I say more?
Remind me never again to say the words 'Immortal Love Rodd' as I will burst into uncontrollable laughter and be a victim of hilarity for twenty minutes.
Just spent twenty minutes reading this. Omigosh I love Sirius. He's hilarious. Just had to say that. I think you've got Mr. Black spot on and have portrayed him better in 'First' than in any other fanfic I've read. Nice ending, very clever. But we all know what happens next. :(
Anyway, awesome story. I think the romance between James and Lily was a bit fast, but that's all I have to say that is vaguely-negative. I really enjoyed the whole thing - you're a great writer. Do anything other than fanfic?
Author's Response: Wow thanks!! I'm really glad you liked it so much!! *does victory dance* THANKS!
Wow, this is fantastic. I thought this'd be another of those Harry Potter and the blah blah fics but it's something more than the trio running off to find Horcruxes. I love this... going to read the rest before lunch.
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you like the story thus far, and thank you for taking the time to review.
It's taken me an hour to read your fic, but I've done it! Anyway, this is shaping up to be one of my favourite fics, so thank you very much - I had a lot of fun reading this. Harry and Ginny are so cute! Stupid Malfoy. But Scrimgeour! Whoa, I didn't see that coming. I've never liked the guy anyway. xD I'll keep readin' as long as you keep writin'.
Ack, if this was fluff than I'm a monkey. I really enjoyed this - as always, beautiful writing.
5000 reads for this little two-chapter story of mine! Merci! Danke! Thanks!
Okay, this is a longer review, so bear with me. Firstly, the theme going on with the chapter titles and story title is very orginal. Great idea.
I love the whole idea of the story, the man-to-man talk between Arthur and Harry and how the Weasleys are all telling Harry off and giving him advice. That was cute. A few characters were a tad OOC, namely Ron and occasionally Fred and George. I think you could have developed Ginny and Harry a bit more, too.
But I thought Hermione was wonderfuly in character, and this line was very funny:
"“It's a love potion. It smells different to each of us, based on what attracts us,” Hermione interjected. Harry looked at her. She slouched down in her chair, trying to make herself very small, and muttered, “Sorry. Reflexes.”"
How very Hermione. You captured her brilliantly. Humour JKR style, I thought.
And speaking of humour, this line was very funny, but not out of place in a romance fic:
" We just talked Harry into taking our only daughter, our fifteen-year-old daughter at that, with him to help to destroy Voldemort."
One more quote for you, don't worry, it's not painful: "Only Fleur and Bill really seemed happy to see him, as she seemed to float out of her chair to kiss him on both cheeks."
Bill and Fleur are made out as one (female) person. Just thought you might want to know.
Anyway, hope I haven't rambled on to much. Great fic, a 10 from me.
Author's Response: Nah, you didn't ramble. I like getting specifics on what people like and don't like about my work. I admit the characters were a wee bit OOC, but I felt it was better to do that than drag this out over several more chapters. I'm a fan of the "be brief and be gone" school. Interestingly, this is a revised version of what I originally posted. Originally, Harry defined the love potion, but after working with a beta from another site, I realized it was very OOC and rather didactic. I remembered Steve Kloves saying that Dumbledore and Hermione were great characters for a screenwriter since they were ready made for exposition. I realized it was a great way to handle this and inject a little humor in the drama.
I love this. Everything is so right and just how I'd like book 7 to be.
"“So you broke off with her to protect her?” Lupin queried.
“That is the dumbest thing I have ever heard.”
“She said it was noble!”
Lupin frowned at him in disbelief.
“Ok, she said it was a stupid noble reason,” he mumbled."
That made me laugh for five minutes straight. And the brothers scene? Hilarious. Everything just seemed so funny after that part that I didn't process the rest. Lol, I'm going to go re-read.
Author's Response: The Stubby Boardman? Quotes - yay, I Iove quotes! Thanks for chiming in!
Wow. This is so well written, especially in the first few paragraphs, that it's almost poetic. I especially like your view of Remus and Tonks because that is exactly how I imagine their future together. Unless - heaven forbid - JKR kills both Remus & Wormtail off in the next book, thus eliminating the Marauders and giving me a murder motive. Anyway, I loved this.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much, Stubby Boardman. Unfortunately, I will no longer be updating at MNFF because of a small dispute with a moderator. However, I do currently have five chapter written and posted on my LJ, which you can find through the link in my profile.
Oh my gherkin! This is awesome. I love the ending, that was just the icing on the cake. I was laughing so hard I fell of my chair. Thanks a bunch, I'm gonna have a massive bruise now. Lol.
Author's Response: Sorry. Bruises on your rear end hurt. (Been there, done that.)
I can't believe this has no reviews. Weird. Anyway, I loved it. You've really captured Sirius and his feelings as he sits in a lonely Azkaban cell. You ended it nicely, too. Thanks for the great read!
Author's Response: Thanks! See, I'm very attached to this story, so I'm really really glad you liked it!
Awesome. This is so going in my favourites. You write really well, you know? This is one of the better fan fics I've read. It was very well planned out and I liked the idea of Hunt-the-Muggle, that was cute. You captured childhood wonderfully. Like Jenn said, you showed the innocence and naviety of the Starling children. I could see the scene playing out in my head. I can't think of anything more to say. I can honestly find no fault in that story. If you wrote a book, I'd buy it.
Author's Response: That's a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much for your review!
-laughs head off-
Um. There goes my head.
*laughs head off* You sure are funny. Absolutely loved it. I want more! Personally, I liked the Traumatised one best. Lol about the gloves. And Fed Up of Avoiding Avada Kedavera was very funny. I wonder who wrote that? Very enjoyable. 10 from me.
Author's Response: Ouchies!! Hope you had insurance!! I'm really glad you liked it!! Hmmm, yea, who is really fed up of someone trying to kill him every year?! Thanks for reviewing, and for the 10!!