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A Wolf in the Moonlight by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: When her old pal Rory calls in a favour, Tonks searches for a missing girl with the help of her new love Remus and his 'dog' Snuffles

*Sequel to Once in a Blue Moon*

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 07/25/12 Title: Chapter 20: Moonlight and Mistletoe

Third time reading your R/T fics, and I have a confession to make. The scene with Andrew and Tonks is so touching it always makes me cry.

Author's Response: Aw, man, now I'm thinking about it and getting misty eyed. Thank you!

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/20/11 Title: Chapter 2: Moonlight Confessions

Queen, the Pixies, and Flogging Molly definitely mesh. I have album by all three!

Author's Response: I like your taste in music! Sorry about not replying earlier. I've definitely read (and enjoyed) your reviews. ^_^

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/20/11 Title: Chapter 7: Reflections of Moonlight

That was actually Slim Whitman that made the Martians all go BOOM!

Author's Response: Really? I'll have to look that up. Sad to say, I didn't buy the movie when I saw it in a $5 bin. :D

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/20/11 Title: Chapter 9: Dancing in the Moonlight

Love that you used Tina's most famous dress!

Author's Response: Thanks! That is one awesome dress.

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Date: 11/20/11 Title: Chapter 13: Loving Moonlight

Love the elfin flu!

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! If there's dragon pox, why not elfin flu?

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Date: 11/20/11 Title: Chapter 18: Music and Moonlight

I love that you made Sirius a punk-rocker, it just FITS!

Author's Response: Sirius was rebellious and angry at authority figures. He rode an enchanted motorbike. He had to have loved punk rock. Like you said, it just fits!

Butterfly Summer by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Today is a day of firsts, Remus thought, watching Nymphadora step carefully into the circle of standing stones...He smiled at the woman he loved while his heart leapt at the thought of the most important ‘first’ yet to come.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: Butterfly Summer


Author's Response: Yes, it is. :)

Moonlight and Shadow by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Tonks' world has fallen into shadow. Voldemort has returned, the Order of the Phoenix has risen, and Sirius is slowly drowning in memories and Firewhisky. Tonks needs more than determination to fight the darkness. She needs Remus.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/21/11 Title: Chapter 8: Shadow Rising

Dueling morphs! I love it!

Author's Response: Dueling morphs is cooler than dueling banjos, heh.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/22/11 Title: Chapter 18: Shadow Men

Nice work mixing Hoodoo into the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Once magic is real, all kinds are fair play. :)

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/22/11 Title: Chapter 23: Light in Shadow

The Clash's Train in Vain is IMHO the greatest country song ever written. Thanks for including it.

Author's Response: I've said it before, but I heart your taste in music. It was my pleasure to include it. Music says a lot about people. :)

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/22/11 Title: Chapter 24: Celebration and Shadow

Always nice to see Basil!

Author's Response: I agree. :)

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/22/11 Title: Chapter 25: Shadow of the Snake

I thought it an excellent segue. Many authors get too caught up in creating a creepy mood, with lots of foreshadowing. Senseless violence should always strike without warning!

Author's Response: When you're braced for something to happen, it doesn't have the same visceral shock to it. I agree (again!).

From the Battered Journal of Remus J. Lupin by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

My affinity to the journal compels me to keep it at hand. I, too, am rather shabby, and yet there are pages of my life still unwritten.... Remus reflects on his life and love for Tonks in a companion fic to Moonlight and Shadow that parallels chapter nine onward.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/22/11 Title: Chapter 4: Restlessness and Instinct

"Sid Vicious doesn't wear trainers." Great quote! I can just see a 17 year old Sirius in boots, ragged jeans, and a Sex Pistols t-shirt. It's all the easier because of the movie Sid & Nancy, of course (If you've never seen Sid & Nancy, GO OUT AND RENT IT!)

Author's Response: I've seen Sid & Nancy. That Gary Oldman played Sid and then Sirius Black made it even better. ;)

Waiting for the Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Giant spiders, malevolent bats, wizard scouts...werewolves. Tonks finds life in Hogsmeade far from simple, while Remus discovers having a partner in touch with her inner wolf complicates his mission and his heart.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/23/11 Title: Chapter 19: Waiting to Dance

The Wizards Handshake is a brilliant bit of business.

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought there had to be something binding, yet less lethal, than the Unbreakable Vow. :D

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 11/23/11 Title: Chapter 32: The End of Waiting: Part 2

After rereading this whole series I have to say that I think the whole thing is marvelously well written. The plotting is top-notch, the characterization is deep and well thought out, and the additions (spells, devices, potions, etc) to the Potterverse are ingenious. WELL DONE!

Author's Response: You have a gift of encouraging writers. I'm going to have to look at your page to see if I can return the favor. Thanks so much for reading the stories. I hope you have the happiest holiday--you deserve to be at the top of the "Nice" list. ^_^

After Breakfast by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the Wedding comes the reception. Once the guests are greeted and seated, the meal is served, the Wedding Breakfast.

After breakfast? The speeches.
Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 09/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: After Breakfast

Didn't like it, loved it. I have now read your entire output here on mugglenet, some of it twice, and I'd like to ask you to please give us another chapter of 'Aurors & Schoolgirls' which is my favorite of your unfinished work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The next chapter of A&S is in the queue. The next “Strangers” is being reedited and the next “Moons” rewritten.

Grave Days by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Front page: THE DAILY PROPHET 4 May 1998


Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.


This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.

“Lord Voldemort” was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.

There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.

Continued on page 4


Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?

It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet “He’s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.” This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.

Continued on page 2

The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.
Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 12/06/11 Title: Chapter 15: Postscripts

This is SUCH a good story. It neatly ties up all the loose threads from the series in a logical and touching way. I really like Fenella Gray, she is a rich and complex character and I cannot for the life of me understand why she wasn't even nominated for the best OC QSQ.

Author's Response: Thank you.
The second sentence of your review is exactly what I was trying to achieve. I'm glad you think I succeeded.
Fenella was a bit player in a couple of chapters. I think she'd need a bigger part to be nominated, but thanks for the thought. She will continue to appear in my other stories.

Girl Talk & Goodbyes by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The wedding cake is gone; the bride and groom are honeymooning. Yet Molly Weasley cannot seem to relax and enjoy the family that lingers in the aftermath of the celebration. She knows the easy laughter they enjoy tonight will be short lived, because three teenagers are leaving in the morning with a job so serious no one will even speak its nature aloud.

Molly knows no magic that will stop morning from coming. But she can make stew and fan the flames of laughter; she can tell someone something she's been wanting to say for years. And she can hold them all while she has them.
Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 12/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Girl Talk & Goodbyes

I don't usually read anything off-canon, but this was brilliant! I wish everyone could have a mum like Molly.

Author's Response: Well, I rarely write anything off-canon, so I know what you mean. ;) Glad you gave it a chance--thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

The Mind of Arthur Weasley by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
The kitchen at the Burrow has six occupants, Harry, Ginny, Ron, Hermione, Molly and Arthur. The youngsters look nervous. Arthur suspects that they are up to something. What is going on inside…

The Mind of Arthur Weasley

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 07/20/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Mind of Arthur Weasley

Just re-read this AGAIN, and realized that I haven't left a review yet. This is my favorite one-shot you have done. The characterization of Arthur is different to those I have seen in most other fan-fic where they portray Arthur as a slightly daft old duffer. I certainly wouldn't want to play poker against YOUR Arthur!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Arthur: husband of Molly; father of the twins; member of the Order of the Phoenix, trusted by Dunbledore. Any one of those shows that he's more than a daft old duffer, in my opinion.

No Contest by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Sunshine spilled down onto the small grassy spot through a window in the tall trees. She stood a couple of yards back, staring at eleven letters cut into rock. It was beautiful, and yet, to Hermione’s eyes, nowhere near a worthy enough tribute for a life so full of rambunctious joy.

This is WeasleyMom of Hufflepuff writing for the Madam Pomfrey One-Shot Triathlon - Round One: Major Canon Characters, Prompt 5 (loss of loved one)
Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall Signed
Date: 09/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: No Contest

The stuff you wrote about grief was as good and to the point as anything I've ever read on the subject.

Author's Response: Thanks you. I have a little experience with grief--glad it's proving good for something. ;) Thanks for the review!