Summary: COMPLETE. A woman visits Hogwarts expressly to meet Severus Snape. Her eccentric aunt led her to believe that he was the kindest, handsomest man to ever grace the earth. What will she do when she discovers the awful truth - let a few minor imperfections stand in the way of romance? Highly Improbable has been recognized by the Multifaceted Awards as Winner in the Laughter Category and Runner-Up in the Identity Category (Best Original Character), and also by MNFF's first annual Quicksilver Quills Awards. Thanks, MuggleNet!
Splendid as usual. I love the way you portray them so realistically and the fact that you don't call Snape by his first name. Jarvey name: Fiosrach. It means 'curious' in Gaelic.
Author's Response: Thanks, Maggie. I will put Fiosroch on the list!
I NEED CHOCOLATE! lol...
You go girl! Your fic is featured! Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh yeah, and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, Maggie!
Your story is simply brilliant! I don't think I've ever read anything as well-written and interesting as yours. You seem to be the only author I've read that is able to capture Snape's personality, and excellently at that.
Author's Response: Thank you, Maggie. I'm glad it's holding your interest. Judging by my chapter hits, half of the readers throw in the towel after the prologue. I'll be the first to admit that it takes awhile for things to get rolling. Thanks for sticking with it!
Finally you update! I'm going to go read it now...later.
this chapter was the funniest of all...except I went berserk when Clancy told Snape the truth! lol
It's an excellent story, and you're a very good writer! However I have a question: isn't it true that when Muggles look at Hogwarts they only see old ruins with a signs that says dangerous building, keep out? How can Clancy see Hogwarts?
Also, I feel that somehow this would belong more in the Romance section.
I love your story! Keep Writing! :-)
Author's Response: Since Dumbledore extended to Clancy his personal invitation to visit Hogwarts, it is safe to assume that he made special arrangements to accomodate her. Also, he sent her a ticket for the Hogwarts Express, so she could arrive by wizarding mode of transportation as opposed to just stumbling across the castle by chance. True, this story is intended as a romantic comedy, but I felt there was more emphasis upon humor than there was upon romance, which is why I chose to submit it in the humor category.
before I read...just wanted to tell you that everything is bold...?
Author's Response: Thank you, Maggie! Everything was centered too! I put in an attention line to request a specific mod, and the html end code must have been deleted. Thank you so much for letting me know!
I loved 'de-twinkled'!
this plotline kind of resembles that other D/Hr fic called ONE COLD SATURDAY which is also in this category, where Hermione also has to tutor Draco. But yours is good, I like the way your style resembles that of JK Rowling's, especially the description of Snape.
Author's Response: thanks :-) oh and i havent seen the one cold saturday fic, i think i'll go check it out now though
I like it
Author's Response: thank you so much! btw i love your stories!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Professor McGogogo...I know there are even funnier parts but that name killed me. :-)
Author's Response: me too! lol! thanks!!!
word...my definition: a combination of letters that form a particular meaning.
Author's Response: *blinks blankly at you* whoa! you used big words!........I'm confused....I like my definition better...lol! thanks for answering my question!
ah....can't get the 3rd chapter up great story can't wait 4 more
interesting...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing my story!!!
Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 72]
Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.
That's an interesting idea...but all the dating stuff REALLY confuses me. Maybe you could...like...focus more on the personality quirks.
interesting idea...if you like, see my humor fic The Three Muggleteers for more Draco/Vince/Greg ideas! :-)
couldn't Harry just Apparated or went by floo to the wedding? really sad story, though.
Oh the Insanity - The Thoughts of Hermione Granger by Hermiones_Revenge
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 721]
Summary: A series of hilarious journal entries and lists from Hermione, describing the insane "war" she has gotten herself into with Parvati. Insanity, and hilarity, ensue... A sequel to "The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" (though it'll make sense if you haven't read it)
Note: Another story from "back in the day."
Okay, your story has a LOT of irony... :-) I did expect Harry would show up with Parvati, though. Constructive criticism: That bit near the end seemed a little crudely-written. Great story!