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I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 08/31/11 Title: Chapter 52: Utter Melee


Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 08/31/11 Title: Chapter 54: A Thankful Return

I really like the story. the way youve wrtten it is amazing. Ilove the cliff hangers ad the way youve incorpurated some of the book. Over all the best fan fiction i have read!!


Trickster by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 131]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.

Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 57376 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
03/04/09 Updated: 08/02/10

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 09/01/11 Title: Chapter 7: Alliances

Love the Charlottes Web Reference!!


We'll Be Young Forever by Proserpina
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 57]


“You and I, we'll be young forever!” *

After a long, interesting, sweltering summer the Marauders are back for their sixth year, and they feel as though their teenage lives have only just begun.

James has been pursuing Lily for years, and he sure as hell isn't going to give up now. Sirius might actually be falling in love (though of course that can't be possible, can it?), and Remus is struggling with problems in his own family. Meanwhile, Peter has to decide how much worth he can put on friends who he will never live up to. And then there's Lily Evans, a girl who's starting to fall for the very man she swore not to. Diana McKinnon, her best friend, keeps finding herself staring at a certain grey-eyed Gryffindor, even though every piece of logic she has tells her that he's trouble.

But even though there's the looming danger of NEWTs, pranks, oily Slytherins, and physical education, a much bigger problem has presented itself. The Marauders' sixteen-year-old world isn't the safe place it used to be. There are rumors of danger and dark magic throughout the school, and of a powerful dark wizard named Voldemort. The Gryffindor sixth years have to decide where their true allegiances lie and how much they are willing to sacrifice for a war that seems impossible to win.

*Title and quote taken from the lyrics of Katy Perry's summer hit Teenage Dream.

Note 3/26: Ok guys so I know that I haven't updated in forever, but I promise I'll finish the story! I'm struggling with some stuff, but hang in there, I haven't forgotten.

Lots and lots and lots of love, Olivia

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity

Word count: 21942 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
02/23/11 Updated: 05/12/12

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 08/31/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Godric's Hollow

I can honestly say i didnt hate it...It was VERY well written!! there werent any moments where i scrolled past. I loved how you had so much detail!!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! I'm glad you didn't hate it. :) ~Olivia

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 09/01/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Letters and Flying Lessons

Oh my goodness!! This story is SO good!! I absolutley cannot wait for you to write more!! Your writing is almost as good as J K Rowling herself (that is a very hard thing to acheive) so Congratulations!!!

Author's Response: You know what, I just got home from an utterly horrible first day of school, and this just totally made my day! I'm very happy that you liked it so much. I'm working on Ch. 8, but it might not be up until the end of the month :(


Jousting by thesmart1
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Love isn't always a smooth road; indeed, James and Lily's story definitely had a rough beginning. A tale of jousting comes forth to describe the duo before they were in love; jousting with words, jousting with wands, and jousting with rolled-up essays. Add in a magnificent prank and a loss of temper, and you've got the start of a love story of a lifetime.

Light-hearted, humorous one-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2746 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/16/11 Updated: 08/20/11

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 08/31/11 Title: Chapter 1: Pranks and Prats and Perseverance

I would love you to continue writing...i really would ;) There isnt that many good stories about Lily and James but this one has me hooked with only one chapter!!PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm pretty busy right now, and when I get back to writing I'll probably work on my chaptered fic first but we'll see for this one :)


That Fateful Year by ginny6142
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: We always knew that James Potter and Lily Evans would end up together, otherwise the Boy-Who-Lived would never have been born, but no one else did until the day they got married. Many people still believed the marriage would end in failure, but the two were deeply in love from a connection they developed during their seventh year. This is a story of that connection.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 887 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
08/20/11 Updated: 08/24/11

Reviewer: longbottom11 Signed
Date: 08/31/11 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is a very good opening to a story that is garunteed to be one that i cant stop thinking about! I look forward to reading your take on how lily and james end up together!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I have the story planned out, and all I can disclose is that it's VERY exciting and in love writing it!

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