KEEP WRITING!!!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!
I really like the story. the way youve wrtten it is amazing. Ilove the cliff hangers ad the way youve incorpurated some of the book. Over all the best fan fiction i have read!!
Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!
Love the Charlottes Web Reference!!
“You and I, we'll be young forever!” *
After a long, interesting, sweltering summer the Marauders are back for their sixth year, and they feel as though their teenage lives have only just begun.
James has been pursuing Lily for years, and he sure as hell isn't going to give up now. Sirius might actually be falling in love (though of course that can't be possible, can it?), and Remus is struggling with problems in his own family. Meanwhile, Peter has to decide how much worth he can put on friends who he will never live up to. And then there's Lily Evans, a girl who's starting to fall for the very man she swore not to. Diana McKinnon, her best friend, keeps finding herself staring at a certain grey-eyed Gryffindor, even though every piece of logic she has tells her that he's trouble.
But even though there's the looming danger of NEWTs, pranks, oily Slytherins, and physical education, a much bigger problem has presented itself. The Marauders' sixteen-year-old world isn't the safe place it used to be. There are rumors of danger and dark magic throughout the school, and of a powerful dark wizard named Voldemort. The Gryffindor sixth years have to decide where their true allegiances lie and how much they are willing to sacrifice for a war that seems impossible to win.
*Title and quote taken from the lyrics of Katy Perry's summer hit Teenage Dream.
Note 3/26: Ok guys so I know that I haven't updated in forever, but I promise I'll finish the story! I'm struggling with some stuff, but hang in there, I haven't forgotten.
Lots and lots and lots of love, Olivia
I can honestly say i didnt hate it...It was VERY well written!! there werent any moments where i scrolled past. I loved how you had so much detail!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! I'm glad you didn't hate it. :) ~Olivia
Oh my goodness!! This story is SO good!! I absolutley cannot wait for you to write more!! Your writing is almost as good as J K Rowling herself (that is a very hard thing to acheive) so Congratulations!!!
Author's Response: You know what, I just got home from an utterly horrible first day of school, and this just totally made my day! I'm very happy that you liked it so much. I'm working on Ch. 8, but it might not be up until the end of the month :(
I would love you to continue writing...i really would ;) There isnt that many good stories about Lily and James but this one has me hooked with only one chapter!!PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm pretty busy right now, and when I get back to writing I'll probably work on my chaptered fic first but we'll see for this one :)
This is a very good opening to a story that is garunteed to be one that i cant stop thinking about! I look forward to reading your take on how lily and james end up together!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I have the story planned out, and all I can disclose is that it's VERY exciting and in love writing it!