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Potter's Pentagon: The Past (Book Three) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 683 Reviews
Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.
Reviewer: tom tom Signed
Date: 09/09/11 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: There And Back Again

This trilogy is the best thing I've seen on mugglenet so far. I simply couldn't stop reading it, and for the past few days I have resented irksome interruptions (I must be related to Jordan) such as the need to eat and sleep. My favourite character would have to be Ted, his 'sunny side up' view on life is inspirational , although, I'm probably most similar to Jordan (can't see the future though). The only real flaw in the series is that although it's set in the UK, too many Americanisms crept in (but are probably only obvious to a Brit like me). Overall though, other than that, hou would struggle to tell the difference between this and J.K.Rowling herself.



Reviewer: tom tom Signed
Date: 09/09/11 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: There And Back Again

This trilogy is the best thing I've seen on mugglenet so far. I simply couldn't stop reading it, and for the past few days I have resented irksome interruptions (I must be related to Jordan) such as the need to eat and sleep. My favourite character would have to be Ted, his 'sunny side up' view on life is inspirational , although, I'm probably most similar to Jordan (can't see the future though). The only real flaw in the series is that although it's set in the UK, too many Americanisms crept in (but are probably only obvious to a Brit like me). Overall though, other than that, hou would struggle to tell the difference between this and J.K.Rowling herself.