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Albus Potter and the Triwizard Tournament by majestic_ginny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Nineteen years had passed since the battle at Hogwarts, and all had been well. Harry’s children had started attending Hogwarts. It is Albus Potter’s first year, and with it starts a new adventure: the Triwizard Tournament is about to start, and Albus finds himself more involved in it than he would have liked.

Join Albus and his gang, which includes his cousin Rose Weasley, a Death Eater's son by the name of Scorpius Malfoy, and Muggle-born Andrew Strathmore, as they find themselves in the midst of danger as soon as their first year starts at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. EDIT: This story is abandoned, and is in the process of being rewritten with an older Albus. I realized that having a first year in the TWT wasn't the best idea :/
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/02/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Wand Weightings and Startling revelations

in chapter 9 we see harry and ginny, and then harry, ron and hermione go to the ministry of magic and then...then there are no more chapters about them.
i think it is nice that sometimes we have a picture of what happens to harry, but i also think that one chapter doesn't mean a lot. it was a very nice one, but to give it sense you should probably write another chapter telling what happens at the ministry of magic (chapter that should probably be before chapter 12). this is just a suggestion!! also because i really like harry and ginny and i like reading about them!

Author's Response: That's a good idea :)! I'll write another chapter from Harry's POV after the next chapter - I think I'd better not keep the readers away from the first task anymore, lol :P - and after that, Ill post a chap on Harry, promise :). --Nadia

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 08/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

so far this is the best story about albus potter i have read!! please please post the new chapter! i just can't wait!
i like the way the story is evolving, and i like that albus is in gryffindor and scorpius is in gryffindor too. i find that this is the most rowling-style story i have read so by now! congrats and write!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm flattered by all your compliments ^_^. I'm writing the newest chapter now, and I'll submit it as soon as I'm done :). Once again, thanks for such an awesome review! --Nadia

Grave Days by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Front page: THE DAILY PROPHET 4 May 1998


Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.


This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.

“Lord Voldemort” was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.

There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.

Continued on page 4


Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?

It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet “He’s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.” This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.

Continued on page 2

The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/25/11 Title: Chapter 15: Postscripts

aren't harry and ginny too...clinging sometimes?
apart from that, i love this!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Possibly, I've actually started to re-edit this story. It's the first thing I wrote and it's showing its age. They are certainly very clingy during the funerals, but I think that's to be expected.

Albus Potter and the Legion of the Serpent by adithyabigal

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Albus Potter is entering his first year at Hogwarts, and, in the Potter tradition, nothing goes as planned. With the stresses of school life, a possessed friend, and an extremely popular brother, will Albus and his best friends be able to save the Wizarding world from the threat of a new dark order, led by a foe even greater than Lord Voldemort?
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 08/22/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Riveting Revelations

wow man this piece of work is really good! i just couldn't stop reading! i hope you post something more soon.

Swimsuit Quidditch by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
It is Ginny’s twentieth birthday, and she wants to play a game with Harry.

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Swimsuit Quidditch

ahahah very funny indeed! :)
i just want to point out one thing, i live in northern italy and i assure you don't easily get a tan here!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
After two weeks around Lake Garda, Verona and Venice, I managed :)

Raindrops by Gmariam

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

He returned with a quiet sadness and a surprising new responsibility to keep him focused. She returned with a misplaced bitterness and the matching position that forced them to work with one another. Yet fear, resentment, and stubborn arrogance kept pushing them apart, even when they were meant to be together.
Winner, Quicksilver Quill for Best Canon Romance. Thank you!!

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 08/23/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

oh man, lily is getting more and more unbearable! let her open her eyes, poor james! :)
good work anyway, this story is intriguing me!

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 11/01/11 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

james is so nice with lily...i like this relation, you can feel they are in love, they care about each other, but they haven't kissed yet (after the events in the prefects lounge). i like when things go on slow cause one can enjoy in a better way the fantastic moments that characterize the beginning of a love.
lily is also getting closer to sirius and remus, and i like this thing too.
keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 10/05/11 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

i like this :) it sounds like things are getting better, starting from the fact that james admits his feelings and he's ready to do whatever is needed to have lily.

"Sirius just didn't think sometimes, especially when his emotions ran so hot; it would be his undoing, someday."
this piece was so sad, thinking about what happened in the 5th book :(

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. And yes, sometimes knowing what comes later makes reading about the Marauders rather sad, doesn't it? Thanks again! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/22/11 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

lily just doesn't understand anything!!! everyone is telling her that james feels something for her and she doesn't see it, and she wastes such a good chance to talk with him!
please update soon, i can't wait! leaving james and lily in this situation...

once again,great work, this story is in my favourites too!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I guess it's not so much that she doesn't see it, she's just won't accept it. She's scared. Hopefully she'll get over it soon...or not. ;) Thanks again, hope you enjoy the rest! ~Gina ;)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/15/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

so sad!

Author's Response: It really is at times. Hopefully it will work out for them. ;) Thanks for reviewing! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/29/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

what the helll???
i hope you don't mess things more in the next chapter, they are sooo confused! and sirius? i think he has something interesting to say, cause he seemed so determined to explain something to james...uhm uhm...you're sooo cruel! :)

Author's Response: Cruel? But they kissed! ;) Thanks for the review! As for messing things up in the next chapter...it'll be up soon! Thanks again! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/07/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

I was feeling the same emotions they were feeling, this is my favourite chapter so far too!! Ohh I'm so happy she has finally realized her real feelings! :)

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 12/11/11 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Six

james reminds me a lot of harry...he thinks everything is his fault and he wants to go on alone not to hurt anyone...
and i also like how aberforth is really like his brother in the deep of his heart. just a barman outside, but a great man inside.

The Drakeshaugh Dragon by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Al Potter is a brave and world famous Auror, but sometimes, he still needs help from his dad. Especially when faced with his brother, and a dragon.

Nominated for: Best Next Generation (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 11/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: The Dragon

i almost cried when harry and james were on the stone...harry is such a good dad!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. He certainly seems to be when we see him on Platform 9¾ at the end of DH. -N-

Over the Next Year by Arial Felchem

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What happened to Harry, Ron, Hermione, and all the others in the hours, days, and weeks following the Battle of Hogwarts?
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/15/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Meeting with the Minister

i really like this, the meeting with kingsley, harry explaining voldemort's secret, kingsley realizing how much they did in the last year...in some passages i had tears in my eyes :)

Author's Response: : ) glad you liked it!

Epithalamium by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Weddings don't just happen you know! They need planning.
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/25/11 Title: Chapter 1: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

i know i'm probably posting too many comments, but i have just read every piece you have about harry/ginny and ron/hermione, and i have decided that i'll officially follow you as the heir of jkr! lol
it is like everyone struggles to write chapters and stories that can fit with the idea jkr has about harry's world, but you don't struggle. it is like it comes natural to you. i don't know if it is true, but that's the message i receive when i read your pieces.

Author's Response: Thank you. :-D
Some of the stories about other characters feature the main four characters, too. (Ginny eventually appears in Fred and George's Busy Day, and Mistletoe Kisses and almost everyone appears in Tales of the Battle at some point).
To be fair, a lot of writers don't want to follow JKR's lead. They choose to ignore the epilogue (or change the personality and appearrance of certain characters). I try to keep everything as close as possible to what JKR says happens. That still gives a lot of room.

After All This Time by xxbabewithbrainsxx

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "After all this time?"*

"Always," said Snape.*

*Page 522, The Prince's Tale, of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, British Edition

Written for the Deathly Hallows challenge over on Poetry, Anyone?

Thank you to Julia for introducing me to pantoums, and Wendelin and Maple for the crit.

Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: After All This Time

i'm not a good writer (actually i'm around only to read XD), so i don't have specific suggestions to give you. the only thing i can tell you is that i really like it, the repetitions are well chosen, they are in the right places. great job!

Author's Response: I love reviews of all sorts :) Thank you very much for your review, and I'm very glad and flattered that you liked it.


The Question (Again) by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry is on his way to ask Ginny a question. No - not a question the question. How hard can it be?
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/25/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Question (Again)

lovely!! :)
you thought perfectly about this, and you wrote perfectly. it wasn't predictable, and it was really funny. i love them and i love the way you write about them!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Hey, brother by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: How desperate were the last days of Regulus Black's life? With a girlfriend in danger, and an increasing dread for his fate, he turns to the only one who can help him.

But will Sirius listen?

This poem/rap was written for the MC Kreacher challenge set by the wondrous Julia (the opaleye). I chose to base the form and feel of the rap on Stan by Eminem featuring Dido. It probably helps if you know the song, but basically there are three voices in this.

Disclaimer: JKR - nope, not me.
Reviewer: chiaraad Signed
Date: 09/27/11 Title: Chapter 1: Hey, brother

we should tell eminem to remake stan with your new words! lol
i really enjoyed this!

ps: why doesn't sirius meet his brother in the end?

Author's Response: Sirius is standing outside Grimmauld Place waiting for Regulus, but it's too late. Regulus has gone to the cave with Kreacher because he thinks Sirius isn;t going to reply *sigh*. The last two verses are Sirius speaking. Thanks for the review. If I see Eminem, I'll tell him - ha ha. ~Carole~