Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.
Poor James! Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Aww, I feel for James too. Glad you like the story so far, and I'll try to update soon! Thanks!
You know why I love this story? You're such a frickin good writer! I think this was one of my favorite chapters. It was fantastic beggining to end, and it did not drag throughout the middle. Great job...10/10
Author's Response: Oh, why thank-you! I'm really glad you like my writing. I'm also very flattered that you liked the chapter and how it was written! Thanks again!
Wow, this was an awesome chapter! Jennifer's bath confession was hilarious! I hope Gryffindor wins Quidditch (and James wins Lily). I'm glad we got to see Audrey again! 10/10
Author's Response: Hi there! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Yeah, the bath scene confession gave me quite a few laughs when I was writing it. Glad you liked Audrey coming in again! Thanks!
wow, they weren't kidding when they said they needed mods.
That was the best chapter! It was really amazing!
Amazing. Sure, the timing is a few years off, but it fits, and it's your story! Great job.
Oh my gosh! I wish I would've been there at that match! James didn't catch the Snitch! Poor James, Lily is driving him insane.
Author's Response: Awww, you feel sorry for James? That's sweet. Thanks for reviewing!
BRILLIANT! Your story is planned out perfectly. I really want to see how Lily proclaims her love for James the next time! And hopefully, the next chapter won't be in the queue for over two weeks.
Awesome! I really liked the bickering! James' confession was really sweet...I'm really angry at Lily for the moment. Great job so far!
Author's Response: Hey there! Aww, I'm really glad you liked James's confession and the bickering bits. Heheh, thanks a lot!
WOW! That was a great ending. JKR would be proud...I loved this entire story.
So much to take in! Loved how you wrote the prank on Snape, and you did an awesome job with the ending with Lily.
Author's Response: Ooh, why thank-you for the nice reivew! I'm really glad you enjoyed the whole chapter with Snape and Lily. Thanks a bunch!
awww! she's leaving! nooooo! i'm glad gryffindor won though...my happiness didn't last though...anyways, i want to find out what happened when james fell...great job with this chapter.
Author's Response: Hey! Aww, yes, the happiness of the Quidditch match was short-lived. With James falling... well... you'll just have to keep reading to find out. Thanks for reviewing!
I liked this chapter. I hope Jen is alright! Great job, update soon!
Author's Response: Hi there! Really glad you liked the chapter! You'll find out what happens to Jen soon enough. I'll try to update a.s.a.p! Thanks!
amazing! nice and long and beautiful...loved it.
Summary: It's the beginning of the end, seventh year.
Sure we all know the basic story, but what really happened in James' and Lily's final year at Hogwarts
James likes Lily and Lily likes James, it should be simple but it's not. Will their relationship blossom as they spend the summer together and as they become head boy and girl? Can their friends help get them together? Will Sirius ever beat James' record-breaking number of detentions? Read on and find out.
A tale about love, hatred, food fights and MWPP.
CAUTION: Contains strong Sirius Black moments, be prepared to fall in love with him.
A/N: I feel so terrible and guilty about everyone who is asking me to update because i have tried and tried but every time i post it it gets rejected. I'm going to rip my hair out if it doesnt get accepted soon! I promise to keep trying, please stick with me in this hour of stress, i need you guys!
I love this story! Can't wait until the nexy chapter! Haha...this is going to be good.
Author's Response: Thanks i appreciate the supposrt, i'm off to post the next chpater just now! :)
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Good chapter! I'm a hopeless romantic. :) I liked the ending, it was funny :)
Summary: *COMPLETED!*What happens when you put a hopelessly "romantic" man-hussy and a girl with a soft spot for bedtime activities (not THOSE activities, silly!) together in a dark bedroom? Well, I don't happen to know either, so I suppose we'll find out together, won't we? Come with me, Tia C. Spencer, on a lovely ride through the countryside... er, lakeside... okay, so we won't actually be riding NEXT to anything, but it will be lovely, I promise you that. How can it not be, with me as your illustrious (and quite possibly mad) companion?
And no, contrary to beliefs very likely impressed upon you by this summary, I'm not a gormless prat.
Well... not entirely.
That was bloody brilliant. HAHA! My favorite story of all time! I like Tia...anyways, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: You are bloody brilliant. And I like your laugh, comes from the belly, that's good. *nods* Tia is glad you like her, you are going on her Christmas card list.
Yes, I will stop being silly now. :p Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Summary: Life for fifteen-year old Lily Evans is pretty crazy. So when Gods-gift-to-the-women-of-Hogwarts, James Potter himself, develops a crush on her, life gets even crazier. And with an insane, gorgeous best friend who belongs in a house for the criminally mad, a bunch of Marauders playing pranks and plenty of laughs, her only retreat is her faithful diary. Yes it’s shaping up to be quite a year…
This story is now in the process of being re-written. Please keep an eye on my author's page as I will update it with a note when I begin to put up the rewritten chapters.
really really funny! animal magnetism! haha, sirius was awesome. great job. update soon!
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the que!
Summary: How do our choices affect us and those around us, and how will their choices be altered? Remus's mother takes a somewhat smothering interest in his condition. How will this change affect him when he goes to school and how can one small choice affect his whole future? Written as a challenge fic for the MNFF Beta Forums by xadie of Ravenclaw House. Entry to September Monthly Contest 3 on the subject of choices or betrayal.
That was so good. Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know what you thought.
Summary: STORY POSTPONED the mods will not accept my next chapter, but if anyone wants to read the rest of this story go on: http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/
Yes, I am kind, and do try to see the beauty in everyone, but I am a little wrapped up in myself. I have too many thoughts.
WARNINGS: Angsty, upsetting, some mild language and fighting later on. Not an average teen James/Lily fic.
This is soo good! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Next chap in que! Thanks for the review!