From Hear to Here: The Battle through Different Eyes by Zack
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Michael Owens never wanted to participate in the Battle of Hogwarts on that night in early May. He had just fallen asleep in his four poster bed in his Ravenclaw dormitory, trying to forget about the harsh realities of life under Snape, when he is awoken and made to meet in the Great Hall.
When battle ensues, Michael must make a fateful choice when his best friend sneaks back after evacuation--does he return to save his friend, or save himself?
This is very well written. I'm interested to see where you're going to take it.
This was again, very well written. I don't know how Michael would know that the Order members are in fact members of the Order. That was all kept very hush hush. That's the only problem I had. I enjoyed these chapters a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! As for your comment about the Order, Owen's father and mother were members of the Order, and therefore taught Owen all about the group. When Voldemort returned, they decided not to rejoin because they deemed it too dangerous to join the Order, as they were afraid of being caught and of Owen being orphaned. Hope this explains some!