This is very well written. I'm interested to see where you're going to take it.
This was again, very well written. I don't know how Michael would know that the Order members are in fact members of the Order. That was all kept very hush hush. That's the only problem I had. I enjoyed these chapters a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! As for your comment about the Order, Owen's father and mother were members of the Order, and therefore taught Owen all about the group. When Voldemort returned, they decided not to rejoin because they deemed it too dangerous to join the Order, as they were afraid of being caught and of Owen being orphaned. Hope this explains some!