Haha, this is so funny, cute, and well done. Yay for their happy ending! :D Just a thought, when are you going to updat "Snivellus and the Head Girl"? It's been a while... I love that story!
Author's Response: Hello-- sorry for the long delay on updating "Snivellus and the Head Girl"-- writer's block and real life have made it kind of difficult, but I'm still working on it. I'm hoping to update it some time soon. Glad you liked this one too. :)
Haha, this is so gosh darn cute! It seems exactly like something Snape would do for her as a kid. I love their childhood stories. Thanks. *Adds story to Favorites*
I really like this story. It's short, but sweet and it has that childlike innocence that everyone fondly remembers as they get older. You wrote 9 year old Snape very well. Shy, abused, curious, and, even at that age, in love.
I liked it. It was a bit short for my liking but as long as you keep writing more chapters I don't see why that should be such a big problem. You certainly have James' over-protection of Lily down don't you? :)