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Chocolate Frog by L A Moody
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 147]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAmid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing more than a tidbit amid the sweeping despair of Deathly Hallows, yet it would not let go of my imagination. Had I found the casually inserted pivotal clue that would rise like Nicolas Flamel from the pages of the first book? Or had I stumbled upon another Mark Evans: nothing but filler detail in the opening pages of The Order of the Phoenix, JKR having overlooked that he bore the same last name as Harry’s mother?

So I waited for my little gem to bear fruit, to become one of those climactic surprises we should have seen coming, but somehow overlooked. Only it never came to pass. The death count mounted to a staggering high, the epic moments came and went, Snape’s back story was finally revealed, and still nothing.

So it has lain, bereft and unwanted, among the detritus of a Diagon Alley the Death Eaters had turned into a bully’s playground. But in the intervening years, this rough diamond has become the inspiration for this story, spreading its tentacles into new and intriguing territories.

Although Harry mentions Chocolate Frog as the title of Mad-Eye Moody’s autobiography at the end of my previous tale, The Dark Phoenix, this version of the story goes beyond that. Nonetheless, the sections representing Moody’s memoirs are clearly labeled.

This story begins with events recounted in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and continues beyond the end of the series. I have attempted to conform to canon as much as possible, elaborating only where the circumstances are vague or passed over. It is an interpretation of the events that happened behind the scenes, so to speak.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 304777 Chapters: 44 Completed: No
Published:
08/30/10 Updated: 05/26/14


Reviewer: Californiasun Signed
Date: 08/14/12 Title: Chapter 9: Nine / Dumbledore: On the Wings of a Thestral

I just discovered "Chocolate Frogs" and haven't been able set it down. Of all the backstories you have created so far, the train station is absolutely stunning. A superb job of storytelling that is simultaneously as uplifting as it is heartbreaking!

Author's Response: I’m so pleased that you discovered my long and winding tale! There are just so many interesting characters to explore. With Dumbledore’s arrival in the tube station in the HBP movie, the significance of the scar on his knee made perfect sense: the man simply likes trains of all sorts. From that, the idea that he, like Harry, would see eternity in terms of a cosmic train station gave rise to all sorts of imagery. In the end, this turned out to be one of my favorite chapters as well. I was so hoping to capture how I felt as I finished DH: that their losses tended to overshadow the fragile sense of victory. Your comments made me think I accomplished this.

Hope you’ll stick by the story -- especially when posting new chapters takes a backseat to real life (which happens more than I’d like).

 

For Hogwarts: A Regency Gamble by Subversa
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 71]

Summary: After the war, Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is in a financial bind. Special Ministry worker Hermione Granger is on site with a team of helpers, full of fundraising ideas, and it seems that Headmaster Snape objects to her very presence there. What prizes will be carried away by all those who embark on Miss Granger's madbrained Regency gamble?

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 120691 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/11 Updated: 01/15/12


Reviewer: Californiasun Signed
Date: 03/06/12 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I came across this story midway and was hooked instantly. Your attention to detail shows your dedication to the storyline. Thank you for a delightful and well played "gamble"!

 

The Latecomer by HalfASlug
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: It's the day every Weasley has been dreading since the battle and now it's George's turn to speak. However, before he can begin, he is rudely interrupted by a latecomer.

Joint winner of Best Post-Hogwarts One-Shot at the 2012 Quicksilver Quill Awards



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 2458 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 07/06/12


Reviewer: Californiasun Signed
Date: 07/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely brilliant! I could picture every step Fred took - you completely kept him in character.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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