Very well written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. As an aspiring writer myself, I just wanted to say that you have a lot of guts, and I absolutely admire you for that. Also, I thought this story was not only funny, but realistic and sweet as well.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't think I'm that gutsy, to be honest, but I'm really happy you thought it was funny and realistic and sweet. If you enjoy my work, maybe you might want to check out my longer chaptered fic, Checkmate? It's James/Lily, but not your typical James/Lily. Or, if you like Scorose, you might like Blood and Roses, which is a murder mystery. Have a good day and cheers for the lovely review!