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The Greatest Reward by Veryala
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Lord Voldemort rewards those who show their unwavering loyalty... and where Bellatrix Lestrange is concerned, he can make it a reward for himself as well.

One-shot, contains torture and strong sexual content.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2079 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/26/10 Updated: 08/01/10

Reviewer: lolc Signed
Date: 07/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Greatest Reward

Woow... I actually really enjoyed your story. I love how it develops and the ending is so perfect. It really reminds you it's Voldemort we're talking about here :) I loved the story so great job :)


Undeserved by Veryala
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: A Lucius and Narcissa romance story.

Lucius' career as a Death Eater hasn't been going so well. But he was the only one who ever had to pay for his mistakes... until the Dark Lord decides that simply making Lucius suffer isn't enough. When the punishment for his latest blunder falls on Narcissa, Lucius has to make a choice - or die trying.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 6005 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
08/02/10 Updated: 06/26/11

Reviewer: lolc Signed
Date: 07/04/11 Title: Chapter 2: Forgiveness

Wow I really love your work :) I love the way you portrayed Lucius and Narcissa. I never really cared much about them when I read the series but now I'm kinda starting to care about them :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you post it soon :P


Hangman by littlebird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOn the morning of Hermione’s 18th birthday, Ron hunts as Harry gathers. One boy is successful, while the other is not. At the end of an hour, who is to blame?


This story has been nominated for the 2012 Quick Silver Quills: Best Dark/ Angst Fic

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2844 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/09/11 Updated: 06/15/11

Reviewer: lolc Signed
Date: 07/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I really liked this. I never liked Ron much in the books I found him rather annoying but I enjoyed this story. I normally don't like stories written in first person but I think here it worked great. It was also written very well so yea great job :)

Author's Response:

Hi, lolc,

I'm glad you liked it, especially if you don't normally care for a) the character or b)the first person narrative.  Thank you for giving it a chance and for finishing it. 

And thanks for the review!

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