Woow... I actually really enjoyed your story. I love how it develops and the ending is so perfect. It really reminds you it's Voldemort we're talking about here :) I loved the story so great job :)
Wow I really love your work :) I love the way you portrayed Lucius and Narcissa. I never really cared much about them when I read the series but now I'm kinda starting to care about them :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you post it soon :P
I really liked this. I never liked Ron much in the books I found him rather annoying but I enjoyed this story. I normally don't like stories written in first person but I think here it worked great. It was also written very well so yea great job :)
I'm glad you liked it, especially if you don't normally care for a) the character or b)the first person narrative. Thank you for giving it a chance and for finishing it.
And thanks for the review!