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E Deus Unum by king
Rated: [Reviews - 145]

Summary: There was once a goofy movie called Clue with a plot that was based on a board game. This movie had several possible endings that were all implausible but they were fun and entertaining. This little yarn is an alternative ending of the Harry Potter series and is offered in the same spirit of fun and entertainment. Of course with themes like love and death it’s not all laughs. This story begins in the summer before Harry’s sixth year. I began writing it months before reading HBP so you’ll have to accept that just about everything in my version of the HP universe is different from JKR’s HP universe. (Pretend HBP didn’t happen.) In my story Hermione has loved Harry since her third year at Hogwarts. She is terrified by the war. If she doesn’t grow up quickly, she might not grow up at all. Since Harry is over his infatuation with Cho Chang, Hermione makes her move and she pulls out all of the stops. Expect some extreme behavior from a girl who throws herself at a project and is under a lot of stress. She still cares deeply about S.P.E.W. OTHER POINTS - Having never heard of a Horcrux, I devised another source of Voldemort’s immortality. - I don’t like Professor Snape, but I’m not bold enough to make him a real Death Eater. - There is a war on and characters are killed, wounded and tortured, but not Dumbledore. - I’ve made Ron into a much more confident and serious character than the books. This is based on three ideas: war is like chess and Ron excels at that, contact with the brain in the DoM could make Ron more thoughtful, and hanging around with a manly man who works with dragons like Charlie Weasley could help any boy grow up.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109770 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/23/05 Updated: 08/01/05


Reviewer: ralula Signed
Date: 07/28/11 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

Very well written, I enjoyed reading you are very talemted. Thank-You for the effort.

 

Summary: Post-Hogwarts, Post-Voldemort, Mystery, Romance.
This story is a sequel to “The Fifth Horcrux” which is in turn a sequel to “Harry Potter and the Needed One”. Harry and Hermione have just graduated from Hogwarts. Voldemort is dead, but his followers still hate our favorite wizard and his leading witch. Fortunately, Harry and Hermione can look out for each other. They are a perfectly matched pair with complimentary skills and a rich history of working well together. Both are talented, resourceful, clever and willing to seize the initiative when necessary. In the dangerous world of wizards, Harry and Hermione need each other.


Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 9294 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
05/07/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Reviewer: ralula Signed
Date: 07/27/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Job Proposal

Absolutely amazing story concept, and very well written, after 2 chapters it would be very easy to follow the whole story.

 

Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37701 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/27/07 Updated: 06/18/11


Reviewer: ralula Signed
Date: 07/14/11 Title: Chapter 14: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Amazingly well written showing Dudley and Petunia in a whole new light. Very enjoyable reading, hard to put down!

Author's Response: thanks!

 

Hangman by littlebird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOn the morning of Hermione’s 18th birthday, Ron hunts as Harry gathers. One boy is successful, while the other is not. At the end of an hour, who is to blame?

One-Shot.

This story has been nominated for the 2012 Quick Silver Quills: Best Dark/ Angst Fic



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2844 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/09/11 Updated: 06/15/11


Reviewer: ralula Signed
Date: 07/18/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Very interesting take on Ron's pov. Also well written!

Author's Response:

Hi, ralula,

Thanks!  And thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Harry Gets Even by Rae Carson
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: Post OotP. Harry gets in a fatal car crash with the Dursleys and finds someone framed him for their alleged murders. In a provocative tale of flight, friendship, and fury, he must learn the will to survive and face destiny comes from mind, body, and soul. After all is said and done, with the unfailing support of those you love, you can never truly be alone. Told from Harry's point of view.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 12934 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/10/11 Updated: 07/28/11


Reviewer: ralula Signed
Date: 07/26/11 Title: Chapter 1: Harry Gets Even

Very interesting story Well written Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for the praise and thank you for your review! ^__^ ~Rae Carson

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