I like it. But I wish that we could see more events from Draco's viewpoint. I also would have liked it more if there was dialogue. But other than that, it was really good!
Author's Response: I felt like if I had shown many more scenes, it would have gotten tedious. How many times can you read that he feels guilty and hates himself before it gets repetitive? And I skipped out on dialogue because it would've been essentially the same stuff that I had in "The Resilient." It didn't feel right just to cut and paste! Hahaha. I'm glad you liked it, though. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!