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Summary: Past Featured StoryThe summer after fifth year, Severus Snape realises that he has to decide between Lily and his Dark companions and pursuits. Now all he has to do is get used to life at Hogwarts with no friends, get over his fascination with the Dark Arts, survive the Marauders, and convince Lily to acknowledge that he's alive.

Easier said than done.



Categories: Severus/Lily Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 97828 Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Published:
03/25/08 Updated: 10/27/11


Reviewer: always_pheonix Signed
Date: 06/06/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Dirty Old Town

I love this story, but sometimes i find that it has to much detail. Don't get me wrong, this is a wonderful story and I love the writng, but in some areas i think there might be a bit too much detail. Asides from that, It's a great story!

Author's Response: No problem with the constructive criticism-- good to know. Glad you are enjoying it. :)

 

Hangman by littlebird
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOn the morning of Hermione’s 18th birthday, Ron hunts as Harry gathers. One boy is successful, while the other is not. At the end of an hour, who is to blame?

One-Shot.

This story has been nominated for the 2012 Quick Silver Quills: Best Dark/ Angst Fic



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2844 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/09/11 Updated: 06/15/11


Reviewer: always_pheonix Signed
Date: 06/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I liked it. I really liked your writing style, also. but I think they were still at Grimuald Place when it was Hermione's birthday. I could be wrong, though. Great story

Author's Response:

Hi, always_pheonix,

I'm glad you liked it.  Of cours, I fact-checked the dates before I began writing this, and the Ministry was infiltrated and the locket taken on Sept. 2nd, while Hermione's birthday is on Sept. 19th.  Do you really think I would be so sloppy as to risk the ire of the canon police in this joint?  No way.  :-)

Thank you so much for reading!

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