I love this story, but sometimes i find that it has to much detail. Don't get me wrong, this is a wonderful story and I love the writng, but in some areas i think there might be a bit too much detail. Asides from that, It's a great story!
Author's Response: No problem with the constructive criticism-- good to know. Glad you are enjoying it. :)
I liked it. I really liked your writing style, also. but I think they were still at Grimuald Place when it was Hermione's birthday. I could be wrong, though. Great story
I'm glad you liked it. Of cours, I fact-checked the dates before I began writing this, and the Ministry was infiltrated and the locket taken on Sept. 2nd, while Hermione's birthday is on Sept. 19th. Do you really think I would be so sloppy as to risk the ire of the canon police in this joint? No way. :-)
Thank you so much for reading!