I am looking forward to exploring the site more, and submitting my own fanfiction!
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and it's amazingly well written! My particular favourites are the mood ring Jinx (what an original idea!) I think this chapter is a lovely moment of connection between Draco and Hermione, that really supports the plot! I'm a massive fan!
I think this is a nice story and I'm a real fan of this ship, but I think the personalities of Harry and Ginny are displayed all wrong. For instance, Harry isn't as soppy as you've portrayed and considering what Harry is like in the 7th year do you really think he would be having sex repeatedly only a year later? The Harry/Ginny ship would still be at a tentative
AMazing! Nothing else to say!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked this story as it's one of my favourites. ~Carole~
I have no criticism at all! I'm astounded and hooked by this story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you like the end of the story, too. ~Carole~
“You and I, we'll be young forever!” *
After a long, interesting, sweltering summer the Marauders are back for their sixth year, and they feel as though their teenage lives have only just begun.
James has been pursuing Lily for years, and he sure as hell isn't going to give up now. Sirius might actually be falling in love (though of course that can't be possible, can it?), and Remus is struggling with problems in his own family. Meanwhile, Peter has to decide how much worth he can put on friends who he will never live up to. And then there's Lily Evans, a girl who's starting to fall for the very man she swore not to. Diana McKinnon, her best friend, keeps finding herself staring at a certain grey-eyed Gryffindor, even though every piece of logic she has tells her that he's trouble.
But even though there's the looming danger of NEWTs, pranks, oily Slytherins, and physical education, a much bigger problem has presented itself. The Marauders' sixteen-year-old world isn't the safe place it used to be. There are rumors of danger and dark magic throughout the school, and of a powerful dark wizard named Voldemort. The Gryffindor sixth years have to decide where their true allegiances lie and how much they are willing to sacrifice for a war that seems impossible to win.
*Title and quote taken from the lyrics of Katy Perry's summer hit Teenage Dream.
Note 3/26: Ok guys so I know that I haven't updated in forever, but I promise I'll finish the story! I'm struggling with some stuff, but hang in there, I haven't forgotten.
Lots and lots and lots of love, Olivia
Really well written! You're one of the few candid writers I know who can really get the personalities of the characters right!!
Not sure about the bit where Annalisa says she's gay, but I guess that has something to do with the future plot?? Do carry on writing it, I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks! The plot is being renovated right now, but maybe possibly Chapter 6 will be here soon. The Annalisa thing... I feel like a lot of Marauder stories don't address that. Or maybe I just haven't read enough Marauder stories! ~Olivia