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Looking and Seeing by fawkes_07
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 178]

Summary: Set in a world where HBP and DH never unfolded, Draco Malfoy finds himself facing an unnerving challenge: making peace with Hermione Granger.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 28346 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
04/20/08 Updated: 01/31/11


Reviewer: LovelyLucius Signed
Date: 06/15/11 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: November 23, 1997 (continued)

No more? Do you plan on continuing?

 

Summary: Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy attend the Wizarding University of Paris the year after they graduate from Hogwarts.

This is a sequel to the Dragon Does the Tickling, where Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy complete their seventh year at Hogwarts after the war.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 140951 Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/09/11 Updated: 06/06/12


Reviewer: LovelyLucius Signed
Date: 11/13/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Potions Envy

Oh, geez.... You're making me soooo nervous that there is a bump coming soon in the dreamy Dramione world at WUP! Bumps with Draco's widespread appeal, Hermione's blood status, and jealousy and H's need for secrecy! Nervous!!

Author's Response: Of course there's a bump coming! It wouldn't be a good story if there wasn't some problem to overcome. Bear with me though, I think it'll be satisfying in the end. :-) Jenny

 
Reviewer: LovelyLucius Signed
Date: 08/20/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Moving to Paris

I really love your stories. Thanks for being a faithful submitter! This chapter didn't feel quite as genuine to me as most others, in terms of D&H's relationship (dialogue felt more forced), bit maybe that is because they are on Narcissa's turf again? Just a little critique-- I really do think you're great, and it's nice to know there are other adults here! :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry this story didn't ring as true as other chapters. I wrote it using the same process I've used with all the others. It didn't feel more stilted as I wrote it, but you never know how things will come across. Hopefully things will be better in the next chapter. Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story overall. --Jenny

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