That was wonderful! Hilarious. Truly hilarious.
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
Oh, how I love these fanfictions! You're so very talented, and this update was well-worth the wait. Sirius is the same as how Ive always imagined him as a Hogwarts student, and Remus is just great as always. I'm so happy James and Lily have finally gotten together and have stopped letting dumb things get in the way of them being together. That being said, I still can't help but wonder about Snape. We haven't heard about him in a while, though I suppose that's the point. Like, you're trying to show how Lily and Severus totally separated, or in Lily's mind at least.
Anyway, this has gone on long enough, so... Keep up the good work, I guess, and take all the time you need. I'd hate to rush sonething as stupendous as Trickster or Stars Apart.:]