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Right Under His Nose by CathCarl
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 901]

Summary: Harry comes back from serving detention with Ron and finds Ginny and Dean in a rather compromising position. A strange and confusing set of new feelings erupts... like wanting to punch Dean Thomas senseless. But what's confusing Harry most of all is that Ginny no longer seems to be just Ron's little sister... she's a beautiful girl, standing right under his nose-- exactly where he hadn't been looking.

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Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 68103 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
01/15/05 Updated: 08/30/06

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 13: It's Like Magic!

Not sure why anything in HBP would make you want to stop writing this great story. Sure, every fanfic becomes A/U every time a new novel comes out, but that's fine. It's interesting the hostility the Weasley's seem to have in your fic. In most Harry/Ginny fics, they're immediately in favor of the relationship! As long as all ends well, that's fine with me!! :) In short, great chapter, great story, thanks for writing it!!!

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 09/30/05 Title: Chapter 14: What's All the Fuzz About?

You're pretty hard on yourself. This was a really good chapter that did a lot to move the plot forward. I didn't find Ginny to be OOC at all. I think it was just fine and I'm really glad to see an update at long last!!

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 12: Welcome Home

What a great story!! I just found it and can't wait to see Ch. 13. I'm amazed at how well you anticipated the HBP in this story. Thank you very much for writing it and (hopefully) giving us much much more! (I do feel bad for poor Dean though. He's not to blame. I hope you'll find a way for him to be happy too!!)


Centrifugal Force by Melindaleo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 122]

Summary: Originally written for the SIYE summer challenge. Hermione invites Harry, Ron, and Ginny to her house to attend a Muggle carnival. What happens when four kids who have been forced to live under adult pressures are suddenly allowed to act like kids?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4569 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
03/16/05 Updated: 03/16/05

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 08/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: Centrifugal Force

You are unbelievably good at Ginny's POV stuff. Great, great story (as always). Thanks for writing and sharing it!!! :)


Life Happens by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2754]


Life Is What Happens When You Are Busy Making Plans.

This is the story of Harry J. Potter and Ginny M. Weasley, their lives, friendships, realtionships and everything in between. Life doesn't always take the road they expect or want, but they soon learn that no matter what they do or how hard they try, the world stops for no man and that simply put, Life Happens.

Primarily Harry/Ginny but with Ron/Hermione background. Picks up after the end of book 5 and continues into Post-Hogwarts.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 118251 Chapters: 34 Completed: No
04/11/05 Updated: 11/08/06

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 07/28/05 Title: Chapter 12: Reactions

Wow.. outstanding story. Your prose is excellent (shout out to your beta reader!) and you capture the characters very well. I hope you're not going to take this down a dark/angsty path, because if so, you've got it in the wrong category. :) Looking forward to the next part, esp. when Ginny finally reads that letter!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Only the next few chapters are kinda dark and angsty and then it will lighten up....i promise....Ginny wil eventually read the letter (I actually just wrote that scene) but Im not promising that she will read it anytime soon......

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 07/30/05 Title: Chapter 13: Battles

Great chapter. Once again, your prose is excellent. I liked the Mind, Heart and (esp.) Passion. I feel somewhat confident (fingers crossed) that you'll come through with the big happy ending... please don't disappoint me!!! :)

Author's Response: aww well i dont want to disappoint such great reviewer.....


Pure & Proud by SeaIsleWitch
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 268]

Summary: Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson were destined to share a privileged life until the devastating circumstances of their sixth year at Hogwarts tore them apart. Five years later, they separately strive to come to terms with the past and proceed with a life they did not expect…alone. Pure & Proud is presented through alternating chapters of Draco's brooding journal and Pansy's idiosyncratic diary.

~ Pansy Parkinson is written by Sea Isle Witch ~ Twenty-two year old Pansy seemingly has everything a young witch could desire; yet she struggles to build a life for herself independent of her pure-blood family's expectations and without her one true love. From the pages of her private diary, Miss Parkinson shares a précis of the past five years and then gives us a glimpse of her current challenges.

~ Draco Malfoy is written by Desslok and Sea Isle Witch ~ After spending a year on the run and then a year in Azkaban, Draco Malfoy was expelled from England by the Ministry of Magic. He spent the last three years travelling the Continent until he realised it was time to come home. Mr Malfoy discloses his journey back from exile, beginning with a statement to the Ministry of Magic in November of 2002. Complete!

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 152263 Chapters: 64 Completed: Yes
02/08/06 Updated: 06/10/07

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 07/23/07 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

I absolutely approve. You did a far better job than I would have done. I'm glad I could help get this going. I'm sorry I vanished on you, but knew you'd complete it with the same high degree of quality you demonstrate in all your writings. Everytime Pansy pops up in the movies or books, I think of you.

Reviewer: Dessslok Signed
Date: 09/07/06 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-seven: Draco Malfoy - Picking Up the Pieces Once Again

Thanks both of you for the very kind words! I know that SIW is really carrying the load on this story and hope that I'll be able to keep up my end of the bargain. Still, I think it adds a bit to Draco's aura of mystery when the reader doesn't quite know exactly what he's been up to. :)

Author's Response: *grins* - SIW

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