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Journey On Water by SK witch
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1979]

Summary: After the downfall of Voldemort, Hermione decides to take a break and return to the Muggle world. Deciding to go on a Muggle cruise, Hermione realizes that it was the biggest mistake of her life. Now, she's stuck on a boat with her worst enemy. Fights and bickering continue to take place between them and maybe a little something else too...
Hermione makes new friends and meets up with an old friend, Jessie: an arrogant girl who treats Hermione like dirt and desperately tries to seek Draco's attention. (Slightly AU)

Thanks to some of my awesome readers, this story has been translated into Chinese and Vietnamese. For information on how you can see the translated version, please check my profile!

Status: Working on chapter 26. In the meantime, you can have a look at my new one-shot, Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang!

Please note that the date of my last update is incorrect. Apparently there are some glitches in the system regarding to this. Chapter 25 was updated on the 7/09/09!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award in the Non-Canon Romance category

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Categories: Alternate Universe, Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 84528 Chapters: 25 Completed: No
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02/08/06 Updated: 09/01/08


Reviewer: Chabelinni Signed
Date: 05/01/11 Title: Chapter 8: Breathless

Wow! So far, so good! I love the character development, but you could use some help. Why not try focusing on the details and the character's thoughts (i.e. we could have a little discussion between Violet and Hermione to what has happened to Jessie "the arrogant one")?
Anyway, I've noticed some grammar and spelling mistakes (mostly commas), so try a little harder on that!

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