I absolutlely adore Harry Potter. I can honestly say it really made my childhood happier.
I just finished reading your whole story , and I can't believe who you managed to keep the story so interesting. I'm really looking forward to the last five chapters.
I love your plot , you were able to stay true to J.K.R.'s style. I also like how you didn't turn this amazing story into a porn story. I read a lot of HPFF and a whole bunch of them really crossed the line with HGDM sex. And now I understand why did you put the sex scene in chapter 6 , so I take back the thing I said about sex not fitting Hermione well. You made it quite believeble . I'm very eager to find out what happened next. Keep on writing. :))
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. I have to warn you, there will be more Hermione sex in chapter 29 (and some in the sequel I'm working on), which always makes me a little uncomfortable, myself. I hope you like the rest of the story! Thanks, Jenny