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Time-Traveling Can Be Very Complicating by marauder_since_1993

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Two vanishing cabinets and eight teenagers in two different decades. In 1977, James, Sirius, Remus, and a reluctant Lily try to travel to the future. At the same time in 1997, Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny attempt to get to the past. Their paths collide and now they are all stuck in time. What happens when they try to get home?
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/21/11 Title: Chapter 5: Home Sweet Home

That was the most craziest, insane, creative,original, and amazing story EVER!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. You have one amazing brain. Good job on this story!

Lily's Eyes by AlexisTaylor

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What if everyone was quite mistaken, and Lily was not Harry's mother?
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: Lily's Eyes

Ok so this was well written but the whole concept of lily not being Harrys mum and James having an affair with her sister kinda ruined my life for five minutes. Creative, but... You get my point. I really hope I don't sound mean!!!! You're really good at writing!!

Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


"Oh, I can so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

I just watched superman returns and it has so many parallels to this story!!! It's crazy!!!!! Except the Richard in superman isnt a dick. He's actually kinda cool. Great story!!!!!!

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Aunt Katie's Favorite Advice

I don't think I have ever been so emotionally attached to a Mugglenet fan fiction. This story is bloody AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Out of the Darkness by Tim the Enchanter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The war against Voldemort is not going well. The Ministry of Magic has fallen and the Order of the Phoenix is scattered. Harry Potter and his friends are ruthlessly hunted by Voldemort and his Death Eaters. There is no end in sight for our heroes…



Nominated for QSQ 2008 Best Humour Story!
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 06/24/11 Title: Chapter 2: My Goodness My Guiness!

This has nothing to do with your storybut, I read this last night and then you were in my dream. But instead of being absurd, you were really evil. Well I guess it wasn't exactly you but Tim the Enchanter was definitely the name of the evil guy.

Not Your Usual Love Story! by go go ravenclaw, Sainyn Swiftfoot

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: They don't know how, but Dudley and Luna have fallen...for each other. Join them as they fight for their love.
Submission for Gauntlet Round 6: We are Sainyn Swiftfoot of Hufflepuff and go go ravenclaw of Gryffindor.

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 08/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: An Unusual Love

Hee hee!!!! This story was epically epic!!!!!!! It was horribly cute and totally original!!! I'm pretty much jelous of your amazing writing skillz!!!!! Great job!!!!

Hearthlinks by Grace has Victory

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

Growing up with two stepfamilies, Sally-Anne Perks has all the usual family problems in triplicate. Now her stepmother wants to prevent her attending the Yule Ball. Will this ruin Sally-Anne’s chances of winning her prince? And who has stolen her magic shoe?

This is a response to a challenge to retell a traditional fairy tale with a Hogwarts setting. You might consider that I put a twist in the ending… or you might not.

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/31/11 Title: Chapter 3: All the Gold in Gringotts

Warning: this review contains course language and may not be suitable for all readers.
Cressida is a right bitch! Gosh! I just want to punch her non-existent face!
This is such a great story so far! You did a great job on the characters! Very well written!

Author's Response: Feel free to punch away! Sally-Anne would never do that, so she needs you as her champion. Thanks for writing in.

Shooting Stars by GinervaPotter213

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Evangeline Mack isn't the highest on the list of Hogwarts' guys of girls to date, or on the list of many of the girls of people to know.
But why hasn't anyone tried?
Fred gets backed into a corner and gets to see what she's really like.
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/31/11 Title: Chapter 1: Shooting Stars

So cute!!! Great job on this story!

The Dark Lord Acne Syndrome! by Vittoria

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Voldemort has a problem worse than Harry Potter. Acne! Severus Snape, Peter Pettigrew, and Harry Potter are involved in concocting the cure, but would it succeed?
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story! I really like how you made Voldemort seem very... what's the word...self absorbed(I think that what you say). I really over the part where he's just like "yeah like whatever dumbledore! " it just made me giggle. Very original!

The Broom Cupboard by Cirelondiel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Your relationship with Fred existed almost entirely within a broom cupboard.


You and Fred: a Hufflepuff and a Gryffindor, two complementary souls. In a world where nothing is certain, you find comfort in a dusty third-floor storage room.

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Broom Cupboard

That was really good!!!! I have been trying to write a fanfic for a long time but I never really get that far. But as I keep reading these fanfics, I realize that I would really love to do something on Fred and George. This made me " see the light". Thanks for inspiring me!

Trickster by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: After the disastrous events of the end of the Marauder's fifth year, a fuming Lily Evans decides that that arrogant James Potter and his friends need a taste of their own medicine. The straight-laced Prefect suddenly finds herself pranking her class's trickiest boys--and maybe even enjoying it. Coupled with a series of mysterious apology letters that Lily has begun receiving, it's bound to be an interesting year.

Winner of the 2010 QSQ for Best Canon Romance!

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 10/15/12 Title: Chapter 16: Wide Awake, It's Morning

Don't mind me, I'm just dying.
Anyhoo, I really loved this story. I had actually read part of Stars Apart last year (ish) and had no idea it was a sequel. A lot of things make more sense now and I'm going to reread it! Yay!

I'll Pick You Up by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: “Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”

James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.

Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.

With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 07/19/11 Title: Chapter 5: It's Not Your Fault It Gets This Hard

I loved James' memory! I love it when guys have the little relatives and it's just so cute when act all brotherly and caring.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that! :)

Snowflakes by The_Dream_Team

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: And there he was. The one boy she could not stand. His messy, jet black hair was ruffled and untidy and his glasses were sitting crooked on his nose. James Potter was here. With Lily. And all her Muggle friends. At a Muggle ski resort. Could things possibly be worse? Oh yeah, Sirius Black is there, too.
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 06/19/11 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Attempt

Can't wait until chapter 20!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: It has been submitted, so hopefully it will be accepted soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 12/27/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Attack

Please update! It's a really good story, you should finish it!

Author's Response: Hello! I know that this looks awful, because I literally haven't updated in, like, six months, but I can promise you that I wont abandon this story. The combination of hitting a writer's block, having ridiculous amounts of homework, and having finals looming overhead has sort of halted the progress of this fic, but things should be back to normal in about a week! Sorry this is kind of long, but I feel I owe you, and the other readers, an apology :) So thank you so much for reading and hopefully I'll see you very soon!

Soldiers by dominiqueweasley

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "There are many stories between the lines." - Jo Rowling, about the Black Family Tree.

Cedrella's goal all her life has been to be the perfect Black. She has impeccable manners, commands respect, is always composed, and has never had a friend in her life. But Cedrella has a secret that is about to get a lot more complicated…

Septimus is the youngest of seven Weasley brothers. His dearest wish for his seventh year at Hogwarts is to meet the mystery girl he once saw dancing in the Owlery in the dead of night…

This story is a romance, but it is also a story about family, owls, and what it feels like to know you are worth something.
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 06/22/11 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Awwww!!! Loved it!!!! I especially liked the letter to pepper at the end! Amazing story!!

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 10/18/12 Title: Chapter 27: Three Months Later

So um... This is me... Crying... Because well, the Marauders are perf and probably my favourite HP characters and really, it just sunk in that are all dead now. Hence the crying. It's so bittersweet!! Anyways, loved this. It was great.

Author's Response: awww thanks for the reviews!! i know it's the sucky part about being so into the marauders story....it ends so tragically! i'm writing a third one now and it just keeps getting sadderrrr. but i love them too much to stop :)

For Them by hogwartsbookworm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Coming home late from an Auror assignment, Ron faces a conversation he didn't expect... at least, not for a few more years.

Just a fun little one-shot, dedicated to Lori (WeasleyMom), the Queen of all things Romione.

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 04/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Romione

I quite liked the story. Simple, sweet, and well writen.it would have been really epic if it was justa tad longer, but it was great anyways. Loved the jokes about percy! Made me sad to think about george all alone in the joke shop but jk did what she did. Good job!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The Last by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In a world destroyed by bitter hatred, where magic is gone and her family dead and buried, a young woman makes her way to the Department of Mysteries, where she finds the one thing she was least expecting.
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 06/17/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

This was really intense. Nicely written. I liked it alot

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it, as dark as it is. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing this story! ~Gina :)

Incorrigible by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's Halloween and the Head Boy and Head Girl are stuck in the greenhouses for detention. Will they escape the clutches of the deadly Devil's Snare…or worse, one another?
A lighthearted tale for Halloween, not to be read in the greenhouse.
Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 11/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Great story! My favourite part was where James said "Kinky, Evans,kinky." it made me laugh so hard!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I enjoyed writing that line - I could just hear him saying that, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, thanks for the lovely review! ~Gina :)

Wind's Nocturne by Acacia Carter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: There is magic the likes of which humans can barely remember and seldom experience. There is, however, a handful of men privileged enough to experience a part of it: the Dryad's Consorts.

Written for the last third of Madame Alex's Character Triathalon!


Many thanks to Maple for the beta; I couldn't see myself sending this one to anyone else.

Anything you recognise is JKR's. Anything you don't recognise is possibly mine, but probably JKR's.


Wood-nymphs, more commonly known as Dryads, are first and last mentioned in the Potterverse by Fleur in Goblet of Fire. In Greek mythology, these cunning magical creatures are entirely female, and must capture and seduce human men in order to bear daughters and heirs to their forests. In other works of literature they are described as bold and highly territorial, with voracious, er, "appetite" for particular intimate activities. So, basically a shy Herbologist's every fantasy...

Reviewer: dspotter Signed
Date: 09/22/12 Title: Chapter 1: Wind's Nocturne - One-Shot

Wow. That was... Wow.
I'm probably as good with words as Neville is.
But truly, as someone who loves Harry Potter AND Greek Mythology, this was inexplicably cool to read. I love the understanding between Hannah and Melea.
Also, I loved the ending. When I started reading I thought that a story like this had to be more than a one shot but the ending was perfect.