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Potter's Charm by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 2501]
Summary:
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
I think it was really good!
Great start to the story
-Livie
Does them being on the train have anything to do with the prophecy?
-Livie
Good dueling scene
-Livie
I thought Snape was the half blood prince!?!?
-Livie
Short chapters
-Livie
Isn't Snape the Half-Blood Prince???
-Livie
I would love to have my own room personalized for me like that!
-Livie
I don't exactly love cats either.
-Livie
That's funny how much you emphasised never.
-Livie
That's why Voldy wanted to kill James.
-Livie
Wow that was a really short chapter!
-Livie
Wow that was a really short chapter!
-Livie
You're good at doing all the little details like in this chapter and in the previous chapter, bit then the chapters end up being really small.
-Livie
I liked the part when Addison was like:
"I swear, all you Mauraduers are gay."
I died from laughter when I read that!
Keep up the great work!
-Livie
Sirius is soooooo funny!!!!
I could not stop laughing!......I'm still laughing!
This one is defiantly my favorite so far!!!
-Livie
Again, Sirius is soooooooooooooooooooo funny!
I laughed soo hard when he cut himself! I had to put down my IPod so I could calm myself down from all the laughing!
More funny ones please!
-Livie
Poor Lily!
-Livie
That was very short!
But it's ok because the previous chapters make up for it! :) (giggles)
-Livie
It was funny.
I think I've decided Sirius is my favourite character in this little story! :)
-Livie
Ok, that was kinda confusing. But uh... Ok
-Livie
