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Dream Come True by rupertgrintlover13
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 160]

Summary: This is the story that every good Harry Potter fan wants to come true. I hope that I do it justice. Harry has Ginny. Ron has Hermione. Life is sweet…no catch. It’s the perfect dream come true.







It's all full of fluff and pixie dust!





All review get a response!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 13306 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
02/19/07 Updated: 07/02/10


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 07/25/11 Title: Chapter 5: Summer Lovin'

I wish I could see what the dress really looks like in real life! I sounds so beautiful!!!!!:)

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 07/25/11 Title: Chapter 6: 'Til Death Do Us Part

The Chapter was perfect!
I thinkater on in the story you could start with kids later on into R/H and H/Gs marriages. I think if you really became devoted to writing you'd be able to make this a really long story that alot of people would enjoy- in including me(:

Keep Writing! - PLEASE

 

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 228]

Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 130889 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/07 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/28/11 Title: Chapter 32: Murky Revelations: Part Two

This is sooo confusing!!!!! Did Rebecca even kill anyone?
-Livie

Author's Response: Technically, yes she did. She's killed the first four victims. Then the Aurors got involved, so she refined her ways. ;)

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/30/11 Title: Chapter 37: Bittersweet Endings

I really enjoyed the story! It was very well written and thought of. I liked how at different parts of the story you made it seem like mabey Daisy had done it so then I would suddenly feel alot of hatred towards Daisy. But then something wouold happen to make her seem completely innocent and I would start thinking in was someone else. So it got VERY confusing at times. But that's what made the story so interesting you -the writer- would give all these different clues to who was the murder was without telling us and having us always wanting to know what will happen next. That -in my opinion- is what keeps people reading and interested!
Keep Writing!
-Livie

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for all your reviews! It was my pleasure to confuse you about the culprit. :D Yes, it takes effort to make sure the readers don't guess the obvious criminal before you want them to, so you've gotta drop subtle hints so that in the end it's not impossible that the person in question is the culprit. :D I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. You can check out the sequel too, if you want to know about what happens to Daisy and Chris. Thank you once again, Livie! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for all your reviews! It was my pleasure to confuse you about the culprit. :D Yes, it takes effort to make sure the readers don't guess the obvious criminal before you want them to, so you've gotta drop subtle hints so that in the end it's not impossible that the person in question is the culprit. :D I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. You can check out the sequel too, if you want to know about what happens to Daisy and Chris. Thank you once again, Livie! :)

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/27/11 Title: Chapter 14: Halloween Scare

You know Emma Watson!!!!!!!!!!
You're soooooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky!

P.S.: love the story you're really doin a good job!
-Livie

Author's Response: Thanks, Livie!

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/27/11 Title: Chapter 14: Halloween Scare

You know Emma Watson!!!!!!!!!!
You're soooooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky!

P.S.: love the story you're really doin a good job!
-Livie

Author's Response: LOL I don't know Emma Watson, hon. I'm not that lucky. :p The 'Emma Watson' I'm referring to on my A/N was a classmate at school who resembled the real Emma a lot. The similarities in resemblances are really uncanny, actually. :o I assure you, I have never set a toe outside Asia to actually know the real Emma. ;) Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/27/11 Title: Chapter 15: Poison

I think Chris might have abused Daisy. Or mabey asked her to do somethng that she really didn't want to do but Chhris tried to get her to do it anyway.

And I'm starting to suspect Chris for the murderer; But I also think the murderer is some one that still hasn't boomed the story yet, someone we don't know.

Author's Response: Hmm... I'll say, keep reading. About Chris and Daisy-- you'll know soon enough! Chris is a git, though. In the sequel to this story, he's even more of a git. :p Hmmm... Chris the murderer? That's fair enough, but why do you think so? But if he IS the murderer, then you surely have met him, haven't you? ;) Thank you for the reviews! :)

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/28/11 Title: Chapter 17: Too Precious to Lose

I really like Chris and Daisy gettin back together.
And now that I think about it I think that the thing that Chris had done to Daisy was that he was practicing healing on Daisy and something went really wrong what happened might have also had alot of blood involved; so then Daisy has this mental image of her lying down on a hospital bed with there being lots of blood. And it makes sense because Daisy is always gettin sick.
Livie

Author's Response: Hello again, Livie! Your reviews are making me jump about. :D Okay, judging by your other reviews, I'm sure you've found out what happened between D and C by now, but you know, Chris is being a bigger git than you thought. ;) Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/28/11 Title: Chapter 18: An Attack on the Heart

you killed Parvarti!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Why?

Author's Response: Hon, I had to get Harry and Ginny together, didn't I? ;)

 

Summary: From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two favorite Gryffies are cleaning up after a hard day of Herbology when click! the door shuts behind them. And locks. What do they do until someone finds them?

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 6615 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/07 Updated: 10/22/07


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 04/02/13 Title: Chapter 4: Part Four: Monsoon Season

That was awesome! I loved it!
It was SUPER funny and very (romantically) sweet!
Loved the ending, hermiones reaction!

 

Summary: James Sirius Potter is a mischievous little six-year-old and is rather like his grandfather, James Potter, and also his namesake, Sirius Black. When he has an idea, he is determined to fulfil it to the best of his ability. He drags his siblings Albus and Lily as well as his cousins Hugo and Rose Weasley into his plan while a twelve-year-old Teddy Remus Lupin watches on, amused.







Written for the September Challenge by FlightofthePhoenix of Hufflepuff



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1730 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/17/07 Updated: 10/22/07


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 05/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: James Potter = Mischievous

That's really good!:) I really like it.
I like that last line: "March mister!" :) that made me smile:)

 

Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.

Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.

Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 65868 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
11/23/07 Updated: 11/18/12


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 10/11/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Interlude

HaHa! That made me laugh!
-Livie

Author's Response: Thanks, Livie! cj

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/24/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - In Memoriam

The Cedric Diggory Memorial Inter-School Tournament ... Boy is that a mouth full!

How do you come up with these things?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Um - too much hot cocoa or raspberry tea when I'm writing? You ask a good question. Sometimes things just pop into my mind, other times, I struggle with coming up with a simple name or activity. *shrugs* Nature of the beast, I guess. cj

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 08/24/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

About a month ago I read the little short story of what really happened in the common room when Harry proposed. And I released it was for this story from the description of the ring.
Anyways I really liked this chapter it was really funny (just like the other ones! - Hallarious!). I really like were you're going with the story it's really interesting; and it's making it hard for me to put my IPod down - Even at 2:00 am! - you see great story's make people do things like that - Well at least me! -
Loving the story!

Author's Response: I am thrilled that you think my writing is funny, and that it is 'un-put-down-able'. Stay tuned - the next chapter is finished, and I hope soon-to-be accepted. cj

 

Summary: What do you get when you have a slightly clumsy Lily, a mischievous Sirius, a peeved and tired Ginny, an annoying Hermione and an unwilling to intervene Harry? The Potter family ski vacation, of course!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 2755 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/08 Updated: 04/16/08


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 04/25/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Plane Trip

Hilarious! I love it!!!:)

 

Jealous Love by Heather25x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Ron and Hermione have feelings for each other, and they both know it, but neither will admit it. As Harry tries his best to simply ignore them, Ron and Hermione try their best to make the other jealous. Harry tries to put up with it, but sometimes you can't ignore these things...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3314 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/31/08 Updated: 04/07/08


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 04/28/11 Title: Chapter 1: Jealous Love

Sweet

 

Summary: Fred and George Weasley get an idea for a prank from doing something they thought they would never do—their Potions homework. Follow them on their journey through pranker’s block, powdered bicorn horn, Muggle food coloring, a random fish, a suction cup, Harry with a toothpick, a very dry avocado, and much too much flour. What happens when this seemingly innocent prank turns wacky? One-shot.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5916 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/08 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 04/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Halarious!
I love the part where Hermione bites at peoples fingers!!!!

 
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 03/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I love this story so much! It's histerical!!! It always makes me smile! You should do some more comedy!
-Livie

 

Summary: In the dead of the night, someone steals Harry's Marauder's Map.

What happens?

Insanity, hilarity and catastrophe, of course! (This wouldn't be a humour story if it didn't, would it?)

As different people try to activate the Marauder's Map, the four infamous Marauders answer back, in their own wonderful style.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 886 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
07/17/08 Updated: 07/20/08


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 04/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

It was awesome!!!!! I loved it you neeeeed to do more chapters!!!!!

 

Summary: It's Harry Potter's first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But his little sister, Kata Potter, still has a year to go. She's still in Little Whinging. And nothing is the same. Her brother is gone, her friends have changed, and she's been told to trust no one. All Kata has left is an assignment from her teacher: find and catalog the twenty things that make her world go 'round. Maybe Kata's too young for the magic, but she's going to have her own adventures... adventures that will take her from Little Whinging to London, a police station, the back of a train, a stage with a bright light... and maybe even to Hogwarts itself.

Twenty Things is a story about finding yourself, your friends, your secrets, and your past, and hacking it all into some sort of future.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 73838 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
01/20/09 Updated: 01/29/12


Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister Signed
Date: 02/29/12 Title: Chapter 12: Screws Fall Out All the Time; the World's an Imperfect Place

I'm really enjoying this story! It can be confusing at times, but also kinda funny :)
Update soon!
-Livie

Author's Response: Thanks! I know it can be confusing, particularly the way I've dealt with merging then canon and alternate universes (this is what confuses most people, although of course I have no idea what specifically confuses you). Anyway, an update will come faster than they normally do.

 
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