I'm Chloe, and I live in Sydney, Australia, the coolest country/continent in the world. I heart books, writing, water polo, netball, dancing (all sorts), chocolate, House MD, and getting reviews!!!
My writing has been getting better as I keep writing, so my later stories are probably better than the earlier ones. I don't know what shipper I am; originally, I was Harry/Ginny, but after I started writing H/Hr, I have confused myself slightly. I detest the thought of Ron/Hermione, although I have accepted that it will happen, and in my stories I kill off Ron mainly because I cannot write him. It is too hard.
Summary: “You have no right Hermione,” he said in a broken whisper. “No right at all.” he repeated.
“I know,” she said. “I’m sorry.”
Harry shook his head. “No.” He ignored the silent question in her eyes. “I am.” And he kissed her.
NOTICE: Further chapters of this story are no longer going to be posted on this site. If any of you are interested go to (portkey.org). My thanks to everyone who has reviewed on this site. You're all wonderful. Here's the link:
Amazing. Best fic i've ever read. Nothing much more to say. 100/10.
Oh my god, this is the best fanfic i've ever read. Makes me go all tingly inside (i love romance stories). I've got no idea why it's got an 'R' rating (so i probably shouldn't tell you how old i am). I WANT MORE!!!!! I'm loving the plot as well. Even though i'm actually a HP/GW shipper, i just LOVE reading HP/HG stories. So keep up the fantastic work!!!!!
Summary: This story is set in the dystopian society of Wizarding England under the control of Voldemort. Fifteen years after leaving Hogwarts, Harry Potter is in hiding; he fears the words of the Prophecy and has lost the will to fight. This story tells the tale of an adult Hermione who sacrifices everything: her family, her moral beliefs and eventually her dignity, in order to save the Wizarding world. She becomes a Death Eater under the recommendation of someone she barely trusts. She struggles to find the courage and strength, but with every choice she makes she gets deeper and deeper into danger.
Chapter 33 is finally up. Thank you for your support and patience..
i only just figured out how to review stuff so i thought i'd just say that your story is AMAZING! I'm serious, sometimes i sit down and start reading and it's like reading a real HP book. Just thought i'd get that off my chest. The romance bit, mmmmmmm.... i find the idea of it a little disturbing, but the way you've written it is really good. I WANT MORE!! So keep the great work up and keep those chapters rolling!
Author's Response: Arwwwww thank you so much! Being compared to the actual books is just.. well... wow! Thank you! Chapter 20 is in queue and chapter 21 is currently 10 lines long. I am going to keep with it, so keep checking back at least once a week!
Summary: 7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?
Oh my God!!!!!!! Best fic eva!!!! I don't know whether i've reviewed yet but i've read both ancient magic and blood of the heart, and they're AMAZING. I suppose it helps that i'm a harry/ginny shipper, though. Anyway, the plot's really good, and i have no idea how you came up with the blood bonds and the ribbons and the circlet and everything else coz i've never read anything like it (no hard feelings to j.k.). I've tried to write fics but they sort of just fizzle out after the first three chapters. Anyway, amazing fic, looking forward to the next chapter, and keep those great chapters coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! What a compliment! My idea beta wvchemteach has been an incredible help as have my readers. I'm thrilled you're enjoyng it!
soz, at the end of that review i wrote 'chapter' twice in one sentence. If this doesn't bug you, ignore it, but having the same word in one sentence really annoys me. (right-click, synonyms)
Author's Response: I love that right-click, synonyms feature and use it often myself! :)
Summary: Hermione's world is shattered when Ron dies. Feeling alone and abandoned as Harry and Ginny find support in each other, she finds the comfort she needs from an unlikely source.
Wow. Seriously, i don't know what else to say. I didn't necessarily agree with what you said about Harry before, but you've written it beautifully, and i just can't resist a good Hermione/Weasley twin fic, though normally it's only one!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the story, and while I know that a relationship between three people is a bit....shall we say unusual? *grin* I just know that I couldn't choose so I didn't want to force Hermione to. *giggle*
UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!
The innocence I’ve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.
Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.
A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.
Oh My God. Wow. Seriously don't know what to say. Even after just reading the first few sentences you can tell it will be an amazing story; it completely gripped me from the start. I really love how you've integrated lyrics to fit into the story, it really makes it special. I actually did something similar recently, but it wasn't nearly as good as what you've done. I want to congratulate you on how well you've written all the characters; it's like Jo is sitting there, writing it all for you. I think you've done Harry exceptionally well, though. Also, the romance is great already. I just can't resist a good love story. The emotions are really raw, you know? And i just love reading Harry/Hermione, even though it's a bit obvious what will happen in book seven (sorry if you disagree with me on that, but my friend is very influential). Thanks for taking the time to read this, as it is mostly just the ramblings of a rather crazy person, as i'm often told. So anyways, keep writing, and i hope the next chapter is as good as the ones i've just read. chlo
I reviewed in the last chapter and this was going to be much of the same thing really, great story, great romance, excellent plotline, you've written Harry really well, and keep it up. The only thing I've got to add is that i really liked that scene where Harry and Hermione were talking
Summary: Dedicated to SecretKeeper, my role model, a writing angel sent from a world where everything is beautiful. Harry must leave for the Final Battle- but there's something... someone holding him back. How can he fight this? His greatest need, his strongest weakness? “…As long as I’m with you, I don’t care about breaking rules or stepping outside boundaries. As long as you’re close to me, whatever comes my way, I know I’ll be fine… just because you’re there with me. I’ve looked death in the face with you at my side, Harry… as long as I’m alive, I’ll be with you.”
*Wow- 800 reads! ...but only a few reviews... can you leave me something to go on before you leave? Thanks to everyone who gave this a chance!*
Very, Very, very very very good, excellent, amazing, awesome, cool, wonderful, and any other word you can think of. It brought a tear to my eye *wipes eye*. Really great stuff. 10/10
"Harry walked to Hermione and hugged her. She kissed him on the cheek and they stood holding one another for a few minutes, taking each other in. It had been a long time since they had been able to relax and they both were glad for the moment."
*Chapter 2 is finally up! Please read and review! I would love to hear how I'm doing!*
Hey, great story!!!! Seriously loving it. I absolutely love HG/HP fics, even though i am actually a HP/GW shipper. You've made Ginny a bit of a slut in this one, though. You've written it really well, so i don't actually hate ron. well done, and update soon!!
Author's Response: I honestly can't say that you will continue to not hate Ron. The next chapter might make you change your mind!
Summary: Harry looks back into Hermione's past and realizes that she deserves more than she gets.
First of all, that was amazing. Truly. I don't know where you live, but I'm going to find out so I can come and steal your talent for writing. Normally I'm not a teary sort of person, but just now, I almost cried. Incredible