I love this story it's so sweet and romantic. I especially like the end but what happens? Who catches the bouquet? I think you should make a sequel if you aren't too busy.
This story is so amazing! The plot line is so interesting and made me want to read more. I thought the end was the best! Fred and George deserved it even if it was rather effective their plan.
I LOVE this story i think it is the BEST fanfic on this entire site. My favorite character is Iola she became my favorite when she helped Lily overcome her fear of horses.
My favorite quote is "He just grins, takes a deep breath, and yells out, “Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down, I pray, oh pretty baby!" I love the song and i think you made this chapter so romantic. Thats why i think that "There’s A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E" is my favorite chapter. It made me cry tear of happiness when reading it.:'). My favorite scene has to be the last one were Lily and James kissed. :D :) Amber
Author's Response: Thank you again, so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and took the time to review - these all feel so old now, but it's always nice to think that people can still enjoy them! :)
On a stormy October evening, a letter, a late night trip to the library and a secret conversation lead Lily Evans to discover that there are several mysteries in her life that only she has the capability and the inclination to solve. The first mystery is James Potter – what could turn him from the arrogant, could-care-less boy that she had previously known to someone withdrawn and far away? Then, perhaps more troubling, there is Esther Collins, the fifth year who has vanished without a trace. Furthermore, one of Lily’s best friends, Izza, is seeing a mystery boy and Lily is determined to know who.
Then there is the threat of war, backstabbing friends and NEWT’s. A disinherited and emotionally battered Sirius Black is the source of heartache for his friends, except perhaps Izza, who, with her own terrifying family, might just understand him. Lily’s closest male friend, Remus Lupin, is hiding a dangerous secret from her. Peter’s girlfriend is screwing him over, and the whole time Lily is struggling to stop the people she loves from coming apart at the seams.
I really liked the end part were she realises that something is up with James siince he and all the Maruders knnow that Izza and Lily aren't on speaking terms. I can't wait for you to update this story as it is amazing!
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
First of all, I do think Mcgonagall is AWESOME. Secondly this chapter is really cool, I liked the Egyptian Curse stones. Although I wasn't to sure how Wormtail was affected by the stone?
Author's Response: ahh that was my favorite part of the movie..."i've always wanted to do that spell!" and oh, he'll get there, no worries ;) thanks so much!
Lily Evans is pretty, intelligent, vivacious… and accused of murder. James Potter is privileged, arrogant, and conceited… and her best chance at avoiding Azkaban. If only he wasn’t convinced of her guilt.
With a war looming in the background and evil slowly seeping into the wizarding world, seven years of secrets unravel, and two very different people find themselves caught up in a battle against privilege, intolerance, and greed.
But even in the darkness, and even in the despair, there is still friendship, and love, and hope.
This chapter was amasing! James' speech was inspiring. This has to be my favorite chapter of the whole story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I spent a lot of time writing James' speech, so I'm glad you found it inspiring. The next chapter is in the queue and will hopefully be approved soon.