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Oh my gosh!! when I read this for the first time, I cried a lot. I'm sorry that you had to deal with that death. I was going through a hard time too when my Grandpa had a heart attack. Amazing writing. Do keep up the good work.
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
"And Then There Were None" by Agatha Christie
Summary: He was on her mind constantly. A vampire sucking on her sanity. She was still drawn to him, so drawn that she couldn't think of anything else but him. Thus when he asks her a question, asks for her consent, she can't refuse... and must succumb to her... Dracula.
SSxHG -- one shot--Pre-HBP
oh you stink. lol. I would have loved a second chappie. I Loved it. With a capital "L." lol.
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This was good, but you might want to put in a little bit more fluff in the later chapters. Small stuff sprinkled in. lol. Just a little spice. I like your story so far, though.
Summary: A passion one can't control, an addictive affair... to what lengths desire and love can take a person?
I just noticed that I read this one before. lol. I got to,"It doesn't sound right if you're not snarky enough." and I knew it. Well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you like it! :)
Summary: Miss Granger and Prof. Snape make the awkward transition to Hermione and Severus...or is that 'Mione and Sevie? Throw in a game of MASH and you have a humorous look at the nature of first names.
I just figured out that I've read this one before. lol. Though, you should be proud because I'm rereading it and enjoying doing so. Excelent play on that game, also. I used to play it when I was younger and I always got 7 kids and an apartment. Nice writing so far. I'm sure to enjoy the rest and will continue to R&R.
::laughs her head off:: Hasn't she gotten herself in a pickle. Yowza
Just like a fine wine. It gets better with age. lol. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
omg. I played Mash with my friends on a bus ride to a museum on a fieldtrip......never again. lol. My favorite snarky teacher was our "adult" and my friends thought it would be funny to put him down for my pet.....surprisingly, he turned out to be my pet and was given his own name...Mr. Patterson. Divine Providence, I think. he he
Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans weren't exactly buddies at first sight. They began virtually as enemies. Gradually, however, they came to respect each other and like each other at Hogwarts. Somehow, that like turned to an eternal love.
Described through the memories of all who knew them, this is the story that follows them through the seven years in Hogwarts, as their rocky relationship develops into a bond that becomes the envy everyone. This is the story that describes the difficulties that they encounter during the terrible years of You-Know-Who's reign. This is the story of the parents of The Boy who Lived. This is the story of the love between Lily Evans and James Potter.
Chapter Five (Friends?) posted - Lily walks into the world she never knew.
Sorry for the (very long) delay.
I thought that Sirius' eyes were blue, and I know for a fact that James' eyes are hazel. It's really good writing and I do hope that you keep up with it but, you might want to work on your vocabulary and use more descriptive words.
Lily's reaction seemed a bit over the top. The Lily in my mind wouldn't have done that. She just met him for pete's sake. She just slapped a stranger!!
Author's Response: Sirius's eyes aren't blue, I looked that one up on mugglenet.com ^^ Vocab is something I usually have trouble with. I just don't know what type of people read my writing so vocab's always a bit iffy for me. You will see Lily change. Here it shows a bit of her naive and immature side. -MM
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.
Oh gosh. You made me cry. lol. That poem worked so perfectly. good job. Really well written. Kudos.
Summary: In the wake of the Final Battle, the Order has opened Headquarters to house its youngest members during a summer of Ministry-sponsored social events. With Snape as a chaperone, and engaged to another woman, the advent of a busy Hermione, determined to see her friends in love-matches, can only be a recipe for disaster.
You're early!!!! yea!!! lol. I love what you've done with it. I'm an avid reader. lol. It's great so far and seems to be looking up for Sev and 'Ermione. Well done, or, should I say, almost done. lol.
When Snape spoke from behind him, he was thankful he had not been drinking, as his body showed every sign of wishing to evacuate all cavities.
I think I almost died from laughing. The mere thought of how many ways and things that can be excreted from the body, made me admire how well thought out that line was. Very nice. lol.
Author's Response: Thank you, ViernaAurora -- I think you\'re the first person to properly appreciate that line!
Oh my goodness. That has happened to me too. I was in a play and I had a corset-style top to the set and it seemes at thought many people taller than me got quite the view. lol.
Summary: The Final Battle is one year past and on the eve of the one year anniversary there is much to be noted. The sacrifices made, the lives lost, the futures changed. And there, if you look, two lives, so intertwined, so connected for so long that are about to collide.
Please note: All warnings do not apply to all chapters, but I would hate to get someone involved and then turned away. This is a Dark Work. You have been warned.
Master of Enchantment is my FAVORITE fanfic. lol. It's simply the best.
Author's Response: okay...
Summary: Peter Pettigrew meddles with things he probably shouldn't, and Severus and Hermione take tea together.
This is a little alternate universe off-shoot of my Daughter of Light series, provoked by a very naughty PM from Jenna this morning. There are scenes of a sexual nature - you have been warned. This will probably be a few chapters in length.
omg......lol. I love it. lol.
oh gosh. I'm a little depressed now. It was very good. I like it a lot.
ooooooooo. she starts to believe. I like. You're a very convincing writer. lol.
Summary: Ron wonders why he and Hermione have yet to start a romantic relationship and he takes drastic measures to find out.
Oh come on!!!! That is totally not Mrs. Weasley!!! Still, it was good of you for the whole lower back thing.
Author's Response: I think that in this case it is Mrs. Weasley. She\'s looking out for her son. She\'s curious... and doesn\'t see that she\'s hurting anyone in the process. But I\'m glad that you kept reading anyways! :D
oooooooooo Kinky!!!! lol. jk. I like it. I think it would have been better if Professor McGonagall heard with Ron and Severus just heard it by chance. I think I just like the thought of him being confused, though. Just my humble opinion. I'm not the writer, so do whatever you please and I promise to continue reading and reviewing. lol.
Author's Response: *snerk* Yeah, kinda kinky. LOL! I\'m glad that you like this. (I also like other\'s ideas and thoughts... even though I won\'t change my story now it does ensure that I keep my ideas open.) Thanks! ~Ginny