I've just finished reading all of you 14 chapters so far - and I LOVE it!
You have made it so easy to imagine the characters and empathize with their feelings and I am really into your story!
I would really love you to finish this - you are such an amazing writer!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry and Ginny (and Ron and Hermione) will continue to move on with their lives, with the usual bumps along the way. The next chapter will not take so long as this one did. -N-
I LOVE this, it is so beautiful. You have captured Hermione's emotions really well and the white rose description is very deep. Please submit more, I'd really love to read what else you have written! :)
Author's Response: Thank you LOADS!! I truly appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Thank you for reading- I'll be posting more stories and poems in the summer (which is in two weeks for me) so please come back and read some more. Thank you again for reading and reviewing, it means so much to me.
Ohhhh I really hate cliffhangers!
I'm loving this so far, please continue:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :)
This is really good! Although I could just KILL you right now for ending Chapter 5 with such a massive cliffhanger - I really want to know who it is!! Haha!
I love how you have made Scorpius' character superior in so many ways to Albus which is ironic because Albus is supposed to be superior to him! It adds a twist and a great alternative to the typical Malfoy-Slytherin stereotype. :)
I also love the spell Hermione invented so they can directly follow apparition, that just sounds SO Hermione Granger!
Please finish soon! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so sorry about the cliff-hanger. I'm almost done with chapter 6, though! I'm so sorry, but my exams are up in a month and I'm just so busy with studies that I've barely had time to write. And I'm glad you liked Scorpius! He's such a fun character to write. And Hermione - I always thought she'd make a new spell. She's so brilliant after all. Once again, thanks for the review! I'll try to update ASAP. I hope you'll like the next chapter! --Nadia