Wow. Awesome but sad ..
Awww! That's so sweet, but so so so sad :(
haha!!! funny as! i loved your comments and bellatrix's! *u r sooo smrt!!!11!!1!!one!!1!!*
HAHA cant wait to read the rest. how's MWAHAHAHAH for an evil laugh??
This was the best story I've read in ages. you really have a talent and you should continue writing! I loved this story so much, hugs for you :)
I'm back! Hehe I love this story aswell! It won't take as long to catch up on this one so please update quickly!!!
Author's Response: Haha this one has only got two chapters up... and it's pretty bad... but I'm glad you like it =D I might go on and work on the rest of this story after Snowflakes is finished, I'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Rawr! I feel so angry with James! Lily Evens is gonna pay....
Haha awesome, like always. And also, another thing i forgot to mention, when James and Lily went to Hogwarts, Dumbledore wasn't headmaster (i think). He was Transfigurations Teacher.
Anyways, update QUICKLY!!!!!!
Author's Response: Actually, he was Transfigurations when Tom Riddle was there, but headmaster during the Marauder's era because he had the Whomping Willow planted for Remus :) Anyway, thanks for reading this old story! Like I said before, I'm not sure if I'll be updating this one much, but if I do, it will be after I finish Snowflakes! Thanks :D
This is such a great story and you are such a great writer! I like how Lily is really good friends with the marauders now and of course how she's in a relationship with James.
The only problem i have are the spells! Like i expected that the death eaters would use more powerful spells and so would Lily, James and Sirius remember, if you dont know many actual spells from the books just make some up! A lot of writers do and no one would know if they didnt say anything.
But all in all its a fantastic story and I can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I agree, the spells could have been more advanced... I'll keep that in mind if I write any more stories! But hey! After a long time, the last chapter is finally up! I hope you are able to read it and enjoy the finale! Thanks for reading :)
I actually haven't even started to read that first chapter, but the summary seen quite halarious and captivating. Also, I've just read the first paragraph, and noticed that you have used my first name as one of the main characters (Cassie, exellent choise by the way ;) )
Okay, I've just finished reading the first chapter, and i think that it's quite good. Keep it going! :)
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you enjoyed my summary! And that's awesome that you're named Cassie! Glad you like the first chapter (it really is the worst...) and it's nice to have a new reader! Thanks for reviewing!!
What does James mean by "jerk-face, you can do better"? That was the best one!
Also i loved this chapter, you definitely captured James as being obnoxious and arrogant! :)
Author's Response: Oh, haha the "jerk-face" thing was just supposed to mean that James thought Lily's choice of name-calling was kinda lame :P And I'm glad that you appreciate arrogant James! He's a blast to write :)
Again, i loved this chapter. Your version of James, Lily and Sirius makes me laugh a ton :D
As for the marridge being Australia, i actually think that would be a great idea, as i live in australia! :)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy that they make you laugh! And that's awesome! I have and Australian friend, so that's cool :D But yeah, it would be a nice wedding spot :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
again i love it :)
Author's Response: I'm pleased that you like it so much! :)
I love the ending :)
Author's Response: Thanks! And all of these reviews are much appreciated :]
very awesome. I like how Lily is super, super smart in this series.
Love it :)
Author's Response: That's good! I wanted her to be smart, just not Hermione-smart... like a mix between Hermione and Harry smart! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Arghh why'd you put a cliffhanger?? I was getting so into it! Please get the next chapter up ASAP!!
Author's Response: Sorry, I really love cliffhangers... :P But hooray! Now, you've caught up! Hopefully, the next chapter will be finished soon :) Thanks so much for taking the time to read all the way from the beginning! Your reviews have been lovely :D
again i love this chapter :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I just submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it will be accepted soon :D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Arghh... That Harry just discusted me. I never want to see him like that again!
Good job on capturing the annyingness of Slytherins. You're really good at making the reader feel the emotions that the charachters are feeling, and that's a hard but awesome talent.
Author's Response: Aw, you're sweet! Sorry this took so long to respond to, but I'm pleased that you liked this little one-shot! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D And I agree, Harry is pretty annoying in Slytherin, so it's a good thing he was actually in Gryffindor :P
Aww Rose is so cute :) This story was awesomely written, and i like the idea of another Potter.
I can't wait to see what happens :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
YEAH GO PURPLE
Author's Response: Purple is amazing. :)
PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!!!! it's such a good story! i really cant wait for harry to hear the truth if he ever does ....
Also one other thing i'd like say is i think this story would be just a tad better by making some more of the characters ones by JKR. But that's me being really fussy ;)
Author's Response: I sent in the next chapter on Sunday, and it should be up any time. More of JKR's characters become bigger parts of the story as it progresses. Thanks for your review! :)