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Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
We are all influenced by the actions or inactions of our parents. The same is true of Scorpius Malfoy; he has been raised by an overly protective mother and a father who is still coming to grips with the mess that his own father made of his life. Scorpius knows that he will be judged at Hogwarts by what others know or think they know about his father and grandfather.
At Hogwarts Scorpius will meet:
Albus Potter the middle child of ‘The Great Harry Potter’ and Quidditch star Ginny Weasley Potter. A boy who not only has things to live up to but an older brother ready to remind him of who’s boss.
Rose Weasley, Albus’ surrogate sister/first cousin, struggling in her own way, not her mother’s way, to succeed.
Kaitlin Jones, daughter of Tornados player Owain Jones and favorite niece of Gwenog Jones, who is at home on a broom and lost almost everywhere else.
Jimber Dokes recent immigrant from the West Indies trying to fit his own magical heritage Vardoo with the Western style of magic taught at the school
Thad Vance, the Gryffindor Quidditch captain, his grandfather and all of his uncles and aunts were killed by Death Eaters, maybe Lucius Malfoy
Meanwhile in London, Draco and Astoria Malfoy try to build a new life and legacy by betting all they own on a Potions Shop in Diagon Alley.
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I really liked it. There's suspense now with the whole Maliaite-thing, and I absolutely LOVE how Scorpius is in Gryffindor, and not Slytherin. Totally a twist. What I'm not fond of, though, is how Lucius and Narcissa are total jerks. I mean, it is kind of obvious that all they wanted in the end was a nice, peaceful life. I don't expect them to be all goody-goody, but they always favored their son. Although, considering they lost their glory and riches, I can understand.
WOW. That was REALLY good! Is the woman who told Snape to come Harry's mom? I just want to make sure. But yeah, you should write moreike this!
Author's Response: Yes, that was the idea :) I'm glad you liked it! I haven't written in ages and just randomly got back on my account tonight for some reason, but just maybe...:) ~LiLu
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! that is all.
Author's Response: lol, thank you!
This is so good! I love mysteries, and this is turning out to be extremely interesting. I really love it, and I am excited and impatient for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update ASAP. I currently have my mid-years, so I can't say when I'll update next. I'll do it as soon as the exams end :) --Nadia
That was good :) I'm also writing a Next-Gen one, with Albus starting his first year. However, I would have like to see them on the train, and perhaps the Sorting Hat's song? On the other hand, super surprised to Scorpius being in Gryffindor. Can't wait to see how this develops :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Originally the first chapter was them on the train, but I just couldn't make it flow well enough. I look forward to reading your story, too! :)